Dreamer

By cre

When spinning with this mad translation
Elixir of some type: elation
Briefly wondering at the notion
I see not strings yet feel their motion

Dare I think I hear the turning
Crisply leafing, fingers burning
Dreamer keep that pagination!
Fill my world with agitation

In my sky, what odd libration
Taunts my eye with deaf dictation
Amazing thought! it renders me
Dancing wildly - pageantry

Delight synapses scramble -ing
Reality goes ramble -ing
Twisted in opposed dimensions
Seeing both - what comprehension!

Moment halting, time resists
I feel not strings yet they exist
Dreamer's halted pagination
Lets leak amazing realization!

Applauding this crazed adaptation
Living life in your quotations
Felt not, saw not - "acquiescence"
Divine! Sublime! my world, in essence

When spinning with this mad translation
Elixir mine, what aberration
I submit - sweet subjugation
Dreamer keep that pagination!

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Published on Wednesday, March 19, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Dreamer"

On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, GirlintheBox (41) wrote:

ive only been a member for one day, but ive managed to read most of your poems. you are incredibly gifted! you are the reason ive searched the web so long and hard to find good poetry...keep it up, and offer me constructive critisism anytime!
On Sunday, November 2, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me (171) wrote:

Reading this had me lost in another realm of poetry, this was a great poem, thank you for sharing it, it is definatly one of my favorite poems ever, it left me stunned ~Emptyness~
On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240) wrote:

Once again... Bravo!
A former member wrote: I too really enjoyed this one. Like they said, flawless rhyme with adept flow.
A former member wrote: Rhyming insanity. Wonderfully done. You've gotta be one of my favorite poets.
On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Jane! That was great. Why must you keep getting better? I'm going to have to hide my face in shame if anyone compares our work. Good job.
On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, Ravenblade (307) wrote:

This has such an awesome rhyme scheme, and great wording. Plus as always it flows extremely well and it has a rhythm that is easy to find. I really wish I had your level of skill when it comes to writing
On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, Jonas (715) wrote:

craziness... i really like where you've been going with your work lately.