Comments by GirlintheBox

  • "i like it...but only one thing is confusing me...when u say "these day", do u mean "this day" or "these days"? jw...great piece tho *krystal*"
    Posted by GirlintheBox on "linger" by mysticventures
  • "ummm...he gave credit at the end...see, let me copy and paste it for you: The first four lines of this poem where spoken at the end of the movie Identity Its not plagerism if you give credit"
    Posted by GirlintheBox on "The Man Who Wasn't There" by Munkey
  • "i did the "i think" theme on purpose...to emphasize the chorus since it doesnt do that, but then again, i was 12 or 13, and had never written b4, so what did i know? if u have any ideas on how to "tweek" it id be happy to listen"
    Posted by GirlintheBox on "Whenever I am Gone" by GirlintheBox
  • "wow...really descriptive..you somehow make ppl see the end as a release, instead of a tragedy..good write *krystal*"
    Posted by GirlintheBox on "Ashes" by -Oz-
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