1. [gasping smiles]

By Six-Out

I'll kiss my love down your neck
if you'll let me. just for a moment.

-
a tongue to your lower lip. to catch your breath.
breathe me in. and let your moans whisper into my ear.
babe. I'll bathe you in the beauty you deserve.
my hands on your thighs. and my my lips teasing you
tasting you. tap-dancing my fingers until your voice cries mercy
and you beg me to keep moving.

your hand on mine. my hand [in] you. and my exhale on your lips.
slowly licking away your inhebitions. as my tongue
slides circles on your chest. and your eyes begging me to move.
pleading for more.

-
tracing my fingers up your abdomen.
licking them clean of you- as I slowly move down.
with your hand-full of my hair. clinching.
my teeth slowly biting at your inner thighs. licking.
my hands on your sides. and your legs around my neck.
your whimpering moans. your body spasming.
emotion run wild- and you screaming to the ceiling.
a kiss.

and your legs relax.

::pulling me up
and onto you. [into you] breathe deep.
breathe held. nails in my back. my lips to your neck.
and a thrust. -this is god in action- physical euphoria.
your teeth bite into my shoulder.
and you.are.me. one in the two. clash.

me-in-you. and you trembling in erotic.convulsions.
my back red- and scraped. your knuckles white. pressed hard.
and your legs around me. sweat dripping.
whispering your orgasmic-nothings into my ear
punctuated by sparodic exhales.
and slight smiles between gasps.

.
cata.tonic.spasms. and your body starts to loosen.
my mouth to yours. with tongues dancing in unison. deeply.
this is euphoria.
with you.wrapped around me.

your eyes speak love. and my words speak it back.
and your lips touch mine.
this is love.


sex is beautiful. just like you.

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Copyright 2005 Six-Out
Published on Friday, September 16, 2005.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Summer likey

  • Niemand On Monday, October 15, 2007, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    Damn, wow, this was REALLY good!-Airi

  • Mari On Saturday, September 8, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    so why dont your eyes speak love back? is it JUST your words?

  • MESUN On Thursday, June 21, 2007, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    bravo sir. makes me think of a rose by any other name would still be as beautiful. excellent.

  • sIo On Thursday, May 24, 2007, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    i do wish this were real...

  • sIo On Monday, August 21, 2006, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    le sigh.

  • BeautifullyRuined On Monday, August 21, 2006, BeautifullyRuined (93)By person wrote:

    This is so sexy but oh so sweet i`d kill to have a guy write something like that about me its perfect *BeTrAyEd*

  • Dei On Thursday, May 18, 2006, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    it's been a while since i've read this. It's no less amazing, no less intense. You keep this up and you're going to be stalked and raped.

  • Cattarax On Sunday, May 14, 2006, Cattarax (210)By person wrote:

    Damn what I would give to be her ... or be the one that you admire .. be the light to your fire ... to feel your tounge go to places mmm damn

  • PoeticHellion On Thursday, May 11, 2006, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    Mmm. Damn. Wow.

  • sIo On Monday, April 10, 2006, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    whoever you wrote this for....or about...damn. this is awesome.

  • Vicious Pixie On Monday, April 10, 2006, Vicious Pixie (58)By person wrote:

    Fucking amazing....I've not read this one before. It was sexy and intense....

  • nell On Saturday, October 29, 2005, nell (270)By person wrote:

    six you always do have a phenominal way with words.....*walks away hot and bothered*

  • Bellezza On Saturday, October 22, 2005, Bellezza (16)By person wrote:

    wow...awesome...very very sensual. Amazing.

  • aCiD aNgEL On Thursday, October 13, 2005, aCiD aNgEL (31)By person wrote:

    damn six.... ;)

  • Liz On Sunday, October 9, 2005, Liz (265)By person wrote:

    You forgot the part where I finger your butt.

  • Six-Out On Sunday, October 9, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    I was saving it for part 2.

  • Philla On Thursday, September 29, 2005, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    Sex never seemed so beautiful. I swear it's an orgasm just reading this =) -*Philla*-

  • Possesion On Thursday, September 29, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    i love it, it makes me ramble you know. With your voice behind the words . . . .magnificent."slowly licking away your inhibitions. as my tongue slides circles on your chest" the very best

  • A former member wrote: "and slight smiles between gasps" - that was sexy as hell...thought turns me on ... lol..excellent poem on the whole

  • A former member wrote: "and you.are.me. one in the two. clash." - love that line...the strength and bueaty of coming together

  • A former member wrote: my, isnt this just sexy. im impressed fully!

  • Sin On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    Jon this was exquisite...made me tremble and that last line stole my heart ~kristy

  • A former member wrote: this is incredible... i practically came when i read this. forgive me, but its really damn good!

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    I guess I'm just good like that.

  • elisa On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    oh...

  • elisa On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    ...my...

  • elisa On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    ...god.

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Somebody's gotta be that guy. ;)

  • elisa On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    if your dick is as big as your throbbing ego.....you are gonna make a lot of loose women happy throughout your life;)

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    ...becky, look at her butt?

  • Dei On Friday, September 16, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    Very well written. It flowed nicely from line to line.

  • ApathysKiss On Friday, September 16, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    languid and smooth as the silk between trembling thighs...very good, jonny boy now if only you didn't expect breakfast in bed from her ;).

  • A former member wrote: ..this was just the way to go back on you word. (Even though most of us kind of knew you would..again.) Seamless. I could fall asleep inside of this, if only to dream it into my mind.

  • A former member wrote: Jon, I do believe everything you touch is foolproof..for that reason

  • A former member wrote: hey...this is tight....people describe making love in different ways but this is the real shyt...this is how love making really is.....

  • A former member wrote: nice man. you really captured an essence here. i could almost feel it... either that or your hand is on my leg again.

  • glasshouse On Friday, September 16, 2005, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    "babe. I'll bathe you in the beauty you deserve" this line coupled with the last one sums it up for me. Beauty. Bodies unite and ignite and beauty is the only -pure- result. Amazing... I don't have to tell you the effect. -Glass

  • Jazz Daffy On Friday, September 16, 2005, Jazz Daffy (18)By person wrote:

    Oi, you've gone and gotten me all..... flustered. I am really glad you decided to start writing again. :D


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