1. [gasping smiles]
By Six-Out
I'll kiss my love down your neck
if you'll let me. just for a moment.
-
a tongue to your lower lip. to catch your breath.
breathe me in. and let your moans whisper into my ear.
babe. I'll bathe you in the beauty you deserve.
my hands on your thighs. and my my lips teasing you
tasting you. tap-dancing my fingers until your voice cries mercy
and you beg me to keep moving.
your hand on mine. my hand [in] you. and my exhale on your lips.
slowly licking away your inhebitions. as my tongue
slides circles on your chest. and your eyes begging me to move.
pleading for more.
-
tracing my fingers up your abdomen.
licking them clean of you- as I slowly move down.
with your hand-full of my hair. clinching.
my teeth slowly biting at your inner thighs. licking.
my hands on your sides. and your legs around my neck.
your whimpering moans. your body spasming.
emotion run wild- and you screaming to the ceiling.
a kiss.
and your legs relax.
::pulling me up
and onto you. [into you] breathe deep.
breathe held. nails in my back. my lips to your neck.
and a thrust. -this is god in action- physical euphoria.
your teeth bite into my shoulder.
and you.are.me. one in the two. clash.
me-in-you. and you trembling in erotic.convulsions.
my back red- and scraped. your knuckles white. pressed hard.
and your legs around me. sweat dripping.
whispering your orgasmic-nothings into my ear
punctuated by sparodic exhales.
and slight smiles between gasps.
.
cata.tonic.spasms. and your body starts to loosen.
my mouth to yours. with tongues dancing in unison. deeply.
this is euphoria.
with you.wrapped around me.
your eyes speak love. and my words speak it back.
and your lips touch mine.
this is love.
sex is beautiful. just like you.
Comments on "1. [gasping smiles]"
-
A former member wrote:
Summer likey
-
On Monday, October 15, 2007, Niemand
(355) wrote:
Damn, wow, this was REALLY good!-Airi
-
On Saturday, September 8, 2007, Mari
(419) wrote:
so why dont your eyes speak love back? is it JUST your words?
-
On Thursday, June 21, 2007, MESUN
(230) wrote:
bravo sir. makes me think of a rose by any other name would still be as beautiful. excellent.
-
On Thursday, May 24, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
i do wish this were real...
-
On Monday, August 21, 2006, sIo
(898) wrote:
le sigh.
-
On Monday, August 21, 2006, BeautifullyRuined
(93) wrote:
This is so sexy but oh so sweet i`d kill to have a guy write something like that about me its perfect *BeTrAyEd*
-
On Thursday, May 18, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
it's been a while since i've read this. It's no less amazing, no less intense. You keep this up and you're going to be stalked and raped.
-
On Sunday, May 14, 2006, Cattarax
(210) wrote:
Damn what I would give to be her ... or be the one that you admire .. be the light to your fire ... to feel your tounge go to places mmm damn
-
On Thursday, May 11, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Mmm. Damn. Wow.
-
On Monday, April 10, 2006, sIo
(898) wrote:
whoever you wrote this for....or about...damn. this is awesome.
-
On Monday, April 10, 2006, Vicious Pixie
(58) wrote:
Fucking amazing....I've not read this one before. It was sexy and intense....
-
On Saturday, October 29, 2005, nell
(270) wrote:
six you always do have a phenominal way with words.....*walks away hot and bothered*
-
On Saturday, October 22, 2005, Bellezza
(16) wrote:
wow...awesome...very very sensual. Amazing.
-
On Thursday, October 13, 2005, aCiD aNgEL
(31) wrote:
damn six.... ;)
-
On Sunday, October 9, 2005, Liz
(265) wrote:
You forgot the part where I finger your butt.
-
On Sunday, October 9, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
I was saving it for part 2.
-
On Thursday, September 29, 2005, Philla
(95) wrote:
Sex never seemed so beautiful. I swear it's an orgasm just reading this =) -*Philla*-
-
On Thursday, September 29, 2005, Possesion
(136) wrote:
i love it, it makes me ramble you know. With your voice behind the words . . . .magnificent."slowly licking away your inhibitions. as my tongue slides circles on your chest" the very best
-
A former member wrote:
"and slight smiles between gasps" - that was sexy as hell...thought turns me on ... lol..excellent poem on the whole
-
A former member wrote:
"and you.are.me. one in the two. clash." - love that line...the strength and bueaty of coming together
-
A former member wrote:
my, isnt this just sexy. im impressed fully!
-
On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
Jon this was exquisite...made me tremble and that last line stole my heart ~kristy
-
A former member wrote:
this is incredible... i practically came when i read this. forgive me, but its really damn good!
-
On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
I guess I'm just good like that.
-
On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
oh...
-
On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
...my...
-
On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
...god.
-
On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Somebody's gotta be that guy. ;)
-
On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
if your dick is as big as your throbbing ego.....you are gonna make a lot of loose women happy throughout your life;)
-
On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
...becky, look at her butt?
-
On Friday, September 16, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
Very well written. It flowed nicely from line to line.
-
On Friday, September 16, 2005, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
languid and smooth as the silk between trembling thighs...very good, jonny boy now if only you didn't expect breakfast in bed from her ;).
-
A former member wrote:
..this was just the way to go back on you word. (Even though most of us kind of knew you would..again.) Seamless. I could fall asleep inside of this, if only to dream it into my mind.
-
A former member wrote:
Jon, I do believe everything you touch is foolproof..for that reason
-
A former member wrote:
hey...this is tight....people describe making love in different ways but this is the real shyt...this is how love making really is.....
-
A former member wrote:
nice man. you really captured an essence here. i could almost feel it... either that or your hand is on my leg again.
-
On Friday, September 16, 2005, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
"babe. I'll bathe you in the beauty you deserve" this line coupled with the last one sums it up for me. Beauty. Bodies unite and ignite and beauty is the only -pure- result. Amazing... I don't have to tell you the effect. -Glass
-
On Friday, September 16, 2005, Jazz Daffy
(18) wrote:
Oi, you've gone and gotten me all..... flustered. I am really glad you decided to start writing again. :D