Comments by Bellezza
- "It's a good poem. I agree with the "I told you so attitude." I am still trying to decide if I like the repitition or not though. It makes seem powerful, but then a little forced as well."
Posted by Bellezza on "Calling Out Silently" by vaultgrl
- "Nice idea behind it. There are a few grammar mistakes that distracted me a bit. I wasn't sure if you meant to do it that way or not. Anyways, welcome! "
Posted by Bellezza on "New Life" by lostshadow
- "Some of the rhymes sound a bit forced, but other than that...simply beautiful. Nice job."
Posted by Bellezza on "High" by Liath