Comments by Bellezza

  • "It's a good poem. I agree with the "I told you so attitude." I am still trying to decide if I like the repitition or not though. It makes seem powerful, but then a little forced as well."
    Posted by Bellezza on "Calling Out Silently" by vaultgrl
  • "Nice idea behind it. There are a few grammar mistakes that distracted me a bit. I wasn't sure if you meant to do it that way or not. Anyways, welcome! "
    Posted by Bellezza on "New Life" by lostshadow
  • "Some of the rhymes sound a bit forced, but other than that...simply beautiful. Nice job."
    Posted by Bellezza on "High" by Liath
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