Dissipate: to squander.

By cre

I would have felt sorry for you
And the child that you used to be
I know that somewhere inside, it still hurts
And believe me, I would have seen.

I would have hugged you tight
And wiped away your so-sad tears
I could have been an angel in your darkness
For all those lonely years.

I would have let my little hand
Rest with comfort in your big, rough paw
I could have helped to chase away
The demons that I'm sure you saw.

I could have let my trusting eyes
Rest on you with most sincere care
I would never have let you be alone
As long as I was there.

I could have been the tiniest light
To shine upon your way
And if ever you needed company
I would have been glad to stay.

I could have been so many things
But instead you chose the worst
You would have had a blessing in me
If you hadn't killed me first.

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Wednesday, March 5, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Dissipate: to squander."

Log in to post comments.
  • Cassette On Wednesday, December 27, 2017, Cassette (1144)By person wrote:

    breathtaking.....

  • A former member wrote: Pure beauty...

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, March 3, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    wow..this is just breathtaking..i love it..just WOW

  • sIo On Friday, January 28, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    so sad and sweet, as if from the purest of souls.

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    WOW, how amazing and heart-wrenching at the same time, i wish i had one-fourth the talent you have cre, you are an amazing poet, great job again as always ~Emptyness~

  • BoldSolitude On Wednesday, April 7, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    moving, I get inspired just by reading your works.

  • sole On Sunday, November 23, 2003, sole (93)By person wrote:

    That last line dropped my jaw, nice write.

  • A former member wrote: Ooohhhh...I liked how it went from very sweet and innocent to so very twisted by the last line. This man, I can kill him yes?

  • anathema On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, anathema (50)By person wrote:

    what an amazing work... the wistful tragedy of it is compelling.

  • Amanda Parnell On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, Amanda Parnell (57)By person wrote:

    That was so beautiful Cre. Simply beautiful. Plus, it was written on my birthday! *kitten*

  • A former member wrote: wow. i love how diverse your topics are when you craft your wonderful works. I'd love to know the mind that can create such wizardy. :)

  • maddin foxxxy On Wednesday, March 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    guess i can relate totally...

  • A former member wrote: Wow, that last line really twists the knife, great on the whole!

  • shadowsinthelight On Thursday, March 6, 2003, shadowsinthelight (146)By person wrote:

    Good last line, keep writing, S.

  • DarkPoet On Wednesday, March 5, 2003, DarkPoet (232)By person wrote:

    Fear not canis familiaris, unless he be not so familiar Scholar

  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, March 5, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    typical... jackasses!!!! HEY!!! fish said by the by *laugh*

  • Jonas On Wednesday, March 5, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    wow... the last line is a heart-breaker. good work dearie. the new pict, it's a good one by the by ;-)


How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]