Dissipate: to squander.
By cre
I would have felt sorry for you
And the child that you used to be
I know that somewhere inside, it still hurts
And believe me, I would have seen.
I would have hugged you tight
And wiped away your so-sad tears
I could have been an angel in your darkness
For all those lonely years.
I would have let my little hand
Rest with comfort in your big, rough paw
I could have helped to chase away
The demons that I'm sure you saw.
I could have let my trusting eyes
Rest on you with most sincere care
I would never have let you be alone
As long as I was there.
I could have been the tiniest light
To shine upon your way
And if ever you needed company
I would have been glad to stay.
I could have been so many things
But instead you chose the worst
You would have had a blessing in me
If you hadn't killed me first.
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Comments on "Dissipate: to squander."
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On Wednesday, December 27, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
breathtaking.....
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A former member wrote:
Pure beauty...
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On Thursday, March 3, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
wow..this is just breathtaking..i love it..just WOW
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On Friday, January 28, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
so sad and sweet, as if from the purest of souls.
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
WOW, how amazing and heart-wrenching at the same time, i wish i had one-fourth the talent you have cre, you are an amazing poet, great job again as always ~Emptyness~
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
moving, I get inspired just by reading your works.
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On Sunday, November 23, 2003, sole
(93) wrote:
That last line dropped my jaw, nice write.
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A former member wrote:
Ooohhhh...I liked how it went from very sweet and innocent to so very twisted by the last line. This man, I can kill him yes?
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On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, anathema
(50) wrote:
what an amazing work... the wistful tragedy of it is compelling.
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, Amanda Parnell
(57) wrote:
That was so beautiful Cre. Simply beautiful. Plus, it was written on my birthday! *kitten*
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A former member wrote:
wow. i love how diverse your topics are when you craft your wonderful works. I'd love to know the mind that can create such wizardy. :)
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
guess i can relate totally...
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A former member wrote:
Wow, that last line really twists the knife, great on the whole!
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On Thursday, March 6, 2003, shadowsinthelight
(146) wrote:
Good last line, keep writing, S.
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On Wednesday, March 5, 2003, DarkPoet
(229) wrote:
Fear not canis familiaris, unless he be not so familiar
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On Wednesday, March 5, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
typical... jackasses!!!! HEY!!! fish said by the by *laugh*
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On Wednesday, March 5, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
wow... the last line is a heart-breaker. good work dearie. the new pict, it's a good one by the by ;-)