a piece of the last time i let you break my heart

By KittyStryker

i always suspected
there were other girls
in your heartstream
in your eyes
your dreams
your whispered poetry

i tasted their poisons on your lips
on my lips

i am one of them
one
of many

your drugs of choice

each one
provides
a different kick
another sensation

and i
am just another pill
in your bottle
of temporary cures

you say
you want
to be wanted
and that
you don't want
to be needed

but i think
you need us
you need
something
to pull the veil over your eyes
so you can't see
what you've
become

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Published on Friday, June 4, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "a piece of the last time i let you break my heart"

A former member wrote: Another great write. Wow... how do you do it? Put love and hate into one great poem... bravo. -CG
On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, Daegonna (27) wrote:

WOW! I Loved This! It's Wonderfully Written! And It Is Just So... Great! ~Daegonna~
On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

FUCKING AWESOME! stoned as can be & i found my self reading this in difrent styles each time a diffrent meaning* FUCKING BRILLIANT! *669*
On Monday, June 7, 2004, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

i write so i don't kill. i also write so i don't dwell. think of it as a way of keeping me from rampages. :)
On Saturday, June 5, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

this "devil" is on your fave list , and every lynching draws a mob ... beautifully written piece , but everybody is a junky to something ... funguy
On Sunday, June 6, 2004, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

think of it this way- i loved the boy i met in Massachusetts. i adored him. i would bleed for him. this boy i met in California... apparently the "real" him... well, i'm not particularly fond of him. ::shrug:: it is what it is.
On Sunday, June 6, 2004, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

and sure... you can argue everyone's a junkie to something. and the people around have to decide if that junkie is someone they can be happy around. i'm a junkie for affection and love- but not at the cost of me. not anymore.
On Sunday, June 6, 2004, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

kick a dog, & it'll return, cause its devotion to its Owner is greater than its care about personal well being. you kick a cat once or twice, & it'll run away, cause it knows it'll just happen again til it dies... a cat runs... & it doesn't look back.
On Sunday, June 6, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

well check this out .. i see your words as pained art .. and thats cool , i wouldnt be all giddy about being the subject of it , but there it is ... you have an amazing way with words , thats common knowledge around here .. but to see comments come up on
On Sunday, June 13, 2004, Jonas (715) wrote:

i think i missed the one calling for my castration... hmmmmmm... despite the subject matter, which would probably bias my opinion, i found this to be an interesting write.
On Sunday, June 6, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

flip the next two ... so it reads right ... funguy
On Sunday, June 6, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

based on a series of poems ... thats all bast ... looks like your setup didnt work out , im sorry 'bout that , it seemed sweet when it started ... but the spectators getting all hopped up , is kinda disturbing , dont you think?
On Sunday, June 6, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

this piece and the others youve written , calling for the villain's castration ... i get lost ... i dont know either of you two , but i wouldnt be so quick to execute either one of you in the public square
On Friday, June 4, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

Ah this is so true. About alot of men in fact. But mister fishy in particular seems to want his ass kicked for all the things he has done. Lets hunt him down and use a few surprises, muahaha ;) -Morb
A former member wrote: I love the thoughts that you convey through this poem...it really shows the way that people can make you feel when they break your heart...or use you. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with the rest of us. :)
A former member wrote: I absolutely love this poem. Your stuff is sooo good. I would be so honored if you took the time to look at some of my stuff and comment.
On Friday, June 4, 2004, The Fallen Angel (234) wrote:

very strong you are as a person through this write surviving the weakening of a weak man...and not many can write this concrete and real with style behind it+fallen one+