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Scholars lore.
By Dancing_Monkey
Beside me walks,
A living organism,
Characterized by voluntary movement,
The beast of non reason.
Caressing the walls of learning,
Incompered, silenced, incaged,
Under wings of dragons.
Good fortune bestowed. satisfied?
Never!
Vide infra. Streets of sin.
The wolves roamed the wild lands once.
freely. Did you hear the calling?
Of totem, struck by prayer,
Scholars lore!
Again the shadow feel,
Upon plains; Moist.
Unity of three,
Triangle of sisters.
Undertake the darklings of tommorow,
Teach them the learnings,
Ages of sorrow.
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Copyright 2004 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Tuesday, January 6, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, December 24, 2007, italianbella
(183)
wrote:
this def does not stop at the last line but instead lingers like the monsters that do hide an many an imagination...youre so brillant I love tis:)
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On Sunday, July 8, 2007, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Lightside/darkside, the elemental desire in us all...this was a towering piece with so much meaning to be gleaned from it along with some brilliant images :)
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A former member wrote:
This was absolutely lovely...I'm truly at a loss for words.
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A former member wrote:
"Undertake the darklings of tommorow,
Teach them the learnings,
Ages of sorrow." I must say this is one of the best stanzas I have read yet
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
this is a challenging piece, i must say... i think i have to agree with sole; i also got a self-duality, multi-faceted essence somehow/where/within...
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A former member wrote:
The hidden wonder...just because you don't believe in Magick...doesn't mean IT doesn't believe in you...a truly mystical piece. Leads to the inner core of universal thought. We are, It is.
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On Saturday, April 3, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
i get the manimal ancientness ... to history's fabled beginning's , and beyond .. the moist plains , oozing under barefoot wildness .. the beast within ...
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On Saturday, April 3, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
code of origins not lost .. i get where we're ( youre) going is a part of where you have been ... this was perhaps deeper than i could dig ... woah man ... just happy with what i could glean from it ... very cool .. funguy
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A former member wrote:
Wow. That last stanza is a killer. This was beautiful. Words that last forever. Beautiful. Great work. -Doll
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, Stranger
(263) wrote:
Quite a bit has been said about this one already. But I would like to ad that you have some fascinating insights and stunning language in this and all of your poetry.
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On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Griffin
(114) wrote:
really good, nice write im in a reading mood, i need a damn poetry slam stupid vermont people
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On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
this is one of my favs i'm adding this i love it lots and lots
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On Thursday, January 22, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Woah I hate commenting on poems saturated with comments... It just seems unfair but talent must be complimented... Deeper meanings plague this work and thought is provoked, always a good thing... Daunted I am by a talent i admire :)
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A former member wrote:
Monkey, this is very pretty. I must say that you also have the writer's gift. A beautiful person makes beautiful poetry.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
My brain, my precious brain!! j/k, great write..very deep (like usual)
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
This is one of my favorites of yours, dear primate. It has the color and melody of beauty combined with the lore of a scholar... a very enjoyable combination.
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
dear primate.. hehe.. :o) thanks man
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
I expect to see this in some kind of hidden chronicle of the future. A book of Nostradamus like passages of history and saddend hope of unrepeated actions and nature. Your writing is stunning. ~JMDW~
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
why thank you.. I will try to kkep this writing theme, but my mind is all messy and I'm not sure I'll be able to focus.. :o)
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
Ha..."try"!! No pedestal peddling here...but I beleive you could keep it up with out trying...it is just something you do.
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
:o)
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A former member wrote:
all im gona say is WOW...I love it alot
~Dragons Girl
(LEAH)
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A former member wrote:
Nice.
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On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
Monkey, you truely write poetry which makes me think, I see so much in this one piece of work, I see man's destructive touch on all living things, that humans try to control that which should never be controlled, , , O.
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On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
the referene to the unity of three brings to mind the weird sisters in Mcbeth and the way they predicted the future, the totem leads to ancient customs when the world was purer,
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On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
Scholars lore, the things written in books, is it not a book written by men is it lore of truth so many symbols of mankind through so many ceturies, am I looking to deep or am I just seeing what I want???
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On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
Very thoughtfull. Both beginning and end intrigued, and the middle awoke interest aswell. My complements. ~S
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A former member wrote:
I'm struck by the beginning. (The whole damn thing is good, don't get me wrong.) And all I think is humanity, and then I suddenly note the irony in this written by one who calls himself "monkey". But maybe I'm just random. *giggles*.
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On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
hahaha.. that's brilliant.. this made me cry tears of laughter..
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A former member wrote:
*giggles*
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On Saturday, January 10, 2004, Methos
(121) wrote:
you know monkey this is the second time i read this, and i just have to comment again because it's so damn good....-Methos
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On Friday, January 9, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
Man...Its good to be back and reading your new stuff...I like this one...more to it though...I KNOW IT!!!
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On Friday, January 9, 2004, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...I'm with sole here on this one in that there's more to it than what I see...*looks at his empty glass*...I really gotta stop drinking...
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On Friday, January 9, 2004, Methos
(121) wrote:
A master of words could not have written this any better...amazing, deep, and has such an intoxicating appeal..Great job-Methos
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On Tuesday, January 6, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
...and then the cloaked man reached out with his bony hand "You are ready to become..." ... This is a peak, you nailed it with this.
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On Tuesday, January 6, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
A quote "And I hope they throw a stone at a window for me when im gone". Yea said before he went out of one himself. But it all remains, no matter the endings, and so I do not see this as a personal poem.
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On Tuesday, January 6, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
It is a rift in time, that cant be touched. And so you reached what the window jumper never did. Tiger
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On Tuesday, January 6, 2004, sole
(93) wrote:
Damn monkey I've read this one about 20 times now and I'm still boggled but I definitely enjoyed the read every time. Maybe it's just about teaching someone else from your own mistakes but there's got to be more to it. Hmmm
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On Tuesday, January 6, 2004, Drea
(1388) wrote:
My banana boy, i LOVE how you make a person really work for the meaning behind your words. This was wonderful (as always). ~Your dp Pixie~
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On Friday, April 23, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
for me the first few lines were best,so very deep and intelligent, i feel the spirit of this, especially with living in norway i can in a strange way see so much in this, superb monkey
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