Good for You Solely

By maddin foxxxy

You told somebody
that now life
could breath
side by side
with you.

And that when
you kiss her,
you can tell
you love her
when you really do.

I said that
it was good
the way you
don't need to
talk to me anymore.

And that you left
the past with me
because we had become
in better company
forevermore.

You said now
it was "quiet",
perhaps you meant
"peaceful"--
who knows?

And how it is that
still I hear that
music....
that strangely comes
and goes.

I said it was good
that you had
managed to find a way
to place fire
to all those letters.

And when you did,
(though I didn't know),
I swear I felt
I could perhaps find (like you)
a way to make life better.

The years go too fast,
and too slow to catch on,
I have learnt
a way for me
to embrace cold.

Wrapped in my world,
lonely, but free,
dancing to sounds
of piano rushes
(as only things to hold).

And you said it was good
to be so far away
and to touch
life...
now in different ways.

I said it was good
to live life
as every second plays...
Good for you solely,
-- I still skip the days --




Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2003 maddin_sexxxy
Published on Thursday, September 18, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Good for You Solely"

Log in to post comments.
  • Midnight Phoenix On Thursday, October 2, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    My modest comments can do nothing to justify the intricate beauty portrayed in this piece. I felt very connected to your words and emotion. Almost as though it were my song. Beautiful.

  • Crystal Passion On Wednesday, October 1, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    oh my goodness the razor edge of your words cut right through me... i can truly relate... ~tear~ -kRYz

  • GreekPhilosopher On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Wow. Fantastic Peice. Glad I Read It. GPhD.

  • Aurora_Light On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    very powerful, lots of feeling very nice indeed.

  • Stranger On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    This is superb. Had to read it several times to take it all in. There is such depth and mystery lurking beneath the surface. Chilling and calming at the same time.Definitely may favorite from you.

  • Mauler On Thursday, September 18, 2003, Mauler (4)By person wrote:

    Very bittersweet and heartfelt.

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, September 18, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    incredibly deep my friend, for some reason i started to watery eyes, there is a sense of melencholy, an underlying theme that is escaping me, but am feeling.......excellent prose truly moved...........urban

  • maddin foxxxy On Thursday, September 18, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    thank you..ur comments are most always welcome.

Contribution Level

maddin foxxxy's Favorite Poets
maddin foxxxy's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.