Wash It Down With Gin
By Intoxicating Delirium
The day you left was the day I cried.
The months of no phone calls
were the days I died.
The long silent nights of nothing to
think about but you.
Were the nights of wondering if you thought about
me too.
The holidays that passed without seeing you face.
Were the holidays of wondering if I was replaced.
The
moments you weren't there when I needed you the most.
Were the moments
I had no one there to help me recompose.
I know you are gone
forever, never coming back, yet I still wonder how it could have been.
It couldn't have been, it wasn't, stupid girl... So I'll just pop
a pill and wash it down with gin.
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Copyright 2013 caitlinryen
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A former member wrote:
Great poem! Much pain and disappointment
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A former member wrote:
It was sad but so beautifully written.
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A former member wrote:
I feel your pain everyone goes through a hard heart break at some point in their life some worse than others I've been there and still fighting to make the best of what i have now great poem gin sure does job with some herb..hmmm (;
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A former member wrote:
very beautiful write sometimes there's nothing better than getting sloshed to clear your mind haha.
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On Wednesday, October 16, 2013, Scorpio999
(52) wrote:
oh my .. so much pain here .. makes for killer rhymes etc .. guys can really suck .. it is our birthright .. seemingly ..
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On Thursday, September 19, 2013, midnights voice
(957) wrote:
Wild Turkey 101 over ice from a frozen love First glass , then make it two Go write a poem or two But at the bottom of every glass I see you looking back , kicking ass Oh well if it's my personal hell Tell me I do it well
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Damn...I know this one all too well. I chose rum & powder & when there was no more, that's when pills popped up. Love works in funny fucked up ways. Nicely penned, cutie :)
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A former member wrote:
love sometimes leaves back so much memories that its hard to give up..i know how it feels..this is a fine piece of poetry..loved the rhyming thing..and the flow is really good.. kudos, nice work!
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On Friday, April 19, 2013, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Really enjoyed the rhyme scheme and subject matter..Cool bananas :)
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A former member wrote:
Gin helps.... but a broken heart is hard to mend... Love this piece nicely done!
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On Thursday, March 28, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...love ended abruptly, & it's hard to recover...but the gin helps...
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On Wednesday, March 27, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Thought maybe this was going in the direction of an MIA soldier perhaps, but soon became an all too common tale with a terrific intro, much enjoyed, cheers! (gin is a fav though I hardly ever dare). OH - try a gin bloody Mary, called a red snapper at the Miami Marriott!
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On Monday, April 29, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
Haha, I will have to try that!!
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On Monday, March 25, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Omg i'm so this girl. so i will pop a pill and wash it down with gin.. hi new friend. join the stupid girls club of fanatical felines. we always have room for one more. i love this. if you eva need anything i'm around. i'll take a shot of gin with you .
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On Tuesday, March 26, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
Thank you, bottoms up :)