Wash It Down With Gin

By Intoxicating Delirium

The day you left was the day I cried.
The months of no phone calls were the days I died.

The long silent nights of nothing to think about but you.
Were the nights of wondering if you thought about me too.

The holidays that passed without seeing you face.
Were the holidays of  wondering if I was replaced.

The moments you weren't there when I needed you the most.
Were the moments  I had no one there to help me recompose.

I know you are gone forever, never coming back, yet I still wonder how it could have been.
It couldn't have been, it wasn't, stupid girl... So I'll just pop a pill and wash it down with gin.

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Copyright 2013 caitlinryen
Published on Monday, March 25, 2013.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Great poem! Much pain and disappointment

  • A former member wrote: It was sad but so beautifully written.

  • A former member wrote: I feel your pain everyone goes through a hard heart break at some point in their life some worse than others I've been there and still fighting to make the best of what i have now great poem gin sure does job with some herb..hmmm (;

  • A former member wrote: very beautiful write sometimes there's nothing better than getting sloshed to clear your mind haha.

  • Scorpio999 On Wednesday, October 16, 2013, Scorpio999 (52)By person wrote:

    oh my .. so much pain here .. makes for killer rhymes etc .. guys can really suck .. it is our birthright .. seemingly ..

  • midnights voice On Thursday, September 19, 2013, midnights voice (957)By person wrote:

    Wild Turkey 101 over ice from a frozen love First glass , then make it two Go write a poem or two But at the bottom of every glass I see you looking back , kicking ass Oh well if it's my personal hell Tell me I do it well

  • Deathkitten On Monday, August 12, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Damn...I know this one all too well. I chose rum & powder & when there was no more, that's when pills popped up. Love works in funny fucked up ways. Nicely penned, cutie :)

  • A former member wrote: love sometimes leaves back so much memories that its hard to give up..i know how it feels..this is a fine piece of poetry..loved the rhyming thing..and the flow is really good.. kudos, nice work!

  • carlosjackal On Friday, April 19, 2013, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Really enjoyed the rhyme scheme and subject matter..Cool bananas :)

  • A former member wrote: Gin helps.... but a broken heart is hard to mend... Love this piece nicely done!

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, March 28, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...love ended abruptly, & it's hard to recover...but the gin helps...

  • dwells On Wednesday, March 27, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Thought maybe this was going in the direction of an MIA soldier perhaps, but soon became an all too common tale with a terrific intro, much enjoyed, cheers! (gin is a fav though I hardly ever dare). OH - try a gin bloody Mary, called a red snapper at the Miami Marriott!

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Monday, April 29, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (273)By person wrote:

    Haha, I will have to try that!!

  • Devilish On Monday, March 25, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Omg i'm so this girl. so i will pop a pill and wash it down with gin.. hi new friend. join the stupid girls club of fanatical felines. we always have room for one more. i love this. if you eva need anything i'm around. i'll take a shot of gin with you . Scholar

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Tuesday, March 26, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (273)By person wrote:

    Thank you, bottoms up :)

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