Baby Doll

By darkheartmagic

Baby Doll
 
I once was your baby,
then you chopped my head,
Dismembered my body,
and shoved me under your bed.

I lay here eyes opened,
and watch the sun fall.
Remembering back when
I was your Baby Doll.

Mommy what happened?
You use to hold me so close,
Please pick me back up,
I'm scared and so cold.

I thought that you loved me,
but here I lay still.
I'm your Baby Doll that you dreamed would come real.

Why Mommy Why,
was I tossed to the side,
You use to spoon feed me,
You brought me to life.

Now under the bed,
I made this new friend.
He stitched me together
With his needle and thread.

They call him dark magic,
But enough about me.
Mommies been bad, and its time that she bleeds.

I'll start with her eyes,
with this spoon I was fed,
Dig them out slowly while shes tied to the bed,
or maybe I'll start with my sippy cup,
sewed to her lips to keep her lying mouth shut.

So many choices, What should I do first?
All I wanted was Love, your attention I thirst.

I think I will start by dressing you up.
Make you my baby, that sips through my cup.
I'll brush your long hair, and tie it in knots.
Will that make you remember what you thought I forgot.

Once I'm in bed you'll see that plastic is real,
and before I began you'll feel as I feel.
Discarded like trash, and tossed to the side,
Alone and abandoned, 'WHY MOMMY WHY'

Look what you've done, and forced me to do.
Now it's just us alone in this room.
With no place to go, and no one to call,
How do you like being my Baby Doll.......


By darkheartmagic
© 2013 darkheartmagic (All rights reserved)

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Copyright 2013 darkheartmagic
Published on Tuesday, September 1, 2015.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: the true reality... Loved it.

  • darkheartmagic On Tuesday, May 19, 2015, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    Thank you I'm working on a short story on this in five different poems I haunt posted any up yet because I'm having to fix the second on. But thank you for you comment hope soon to have them up.

  • TheAmazingCagedOne On Thursday, April 17, 2014, TheAmazingCagedOne (21)By person wrote:

    I AM SERIOUSLY IN LOVE WITH THIS. Great poem! (:

  • darkheartmagic On Friday, April 18, 2014, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    I'm glad that you injoyed this maybe you could tell me what you think of baby doll two

  • PoetessDarkly On Friday, February 21, 2014, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    this is one creepy poem.....Amazing! when a poem reads like a physical reaction that is poetry at its best.

  • soul_versing On Wednesday, February 19, 2014, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    I cannot recall ever dismantling any of my dolls,, come to think of it...I don't recall having any... I was an unorthodox child of sort, really. Had an imagination and used it to write instead of physical play. I've got to say that this is a pretty intense read,, and I particularly love the mini flashback you jolted my brain into, which was unexpected. You have an knack for storytelling and an imagination the is unique; however, what draws me into the writer is the attention to detail. I would absolutely love more detail. I love the story, but was waiting a more dramatic climax. I say... Great piece, sir, and write on! Bows-  Scholar

  • darkheartmagic On Thursday, February 20, 2014, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much If it is detail that you are looking for you should try out my baby doll 2 I'd like to know what you think about it and thanks again for you comment

  • Killerdemonchick On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, Killerdemonchick (54)By person wrote:

    Wow really love the work It's great.

  • A former member wrote: Oh yes very fitting word choice, wafts and flows and gloomy as the story itself.. Well done and forgive me I halted some time at 8th stanza "with this spoon I was feed" did you happen to mean fed?

  • darkheartmagic On Sunday, August 4, 2013, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    yes I did thank you for helping me find that error

  • A former member wrote: Woooow dude beautifully creepy work!! I better apologize quickly to the doll I decapitated haha. Great write!

  • LindaHagan On Saturday, August 3, 2013, LindaHagan (3)By person wrote:

    I love this...really creepy and I could visualize what was happening!

  • blue angel On Saturday, August 3, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    This is amazing and super creepy;)~ I love it... Crafted perfectly*

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    This is darkly beautiful. I love the thought of vengeance from a toy. Poor babydoll. They need love too! If ever there were justice for them, we'd sure be screwed! Nicely penned & much enjoyed :)

  • darkheartmagic On Saturday, August 3, 2013, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much. and yes they do need love to.

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Wednesday, July 31, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (275)By person wrote:

    This is an amazing poem, It's one of my new favorites. So dark and creepy.. love it!

  • Nehema On Wednesday, July 31, 2013, Nehema (962)By person wrote:

    This is very telling and a true story for far too many. You started with tight rhymes that fell loose in the middle and tightened back up towards the end. Not new to writing, even without consistent rhyming, this reads easy, horribly haunting theme, but well written. Welcome to the valley, Devilish told me to read you, I look forward to more of your work - XXOO Scholar

  • darkheartmagic On Wednesday, July 31, 2013, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. But the poem was based on a baby doll that a child threw away

  • A former member wrote: Very well written. Such a dark first post! Loved it and welcome to DP!

  • Devilish On Wednesday, July 31, 2013, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Oh i think i am in love. touch me please. ohhhh mommie. i have a mommie pit me and a few of my friends have thrown ours in.. i think i have one similar called momma will draw them a .. lol. a lil offensive. but everything i write is pretty much offensive. hello there and welcome to darkpoetry. roam around and read others as it will bring them back to you . if you eva need anything i'm a click away.. Scholar

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    Very powerful first write! Welcome to DP ♥

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...could be the sad song & thirst for revenge of any abandoned child. what lies beneath the surface...

  • A former member wrote: I can hear you and feel you so well here. The pain is so well conveyed. Excellent wordchoices and sadness piercing through...

  • darkheartmagic On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much for your comment.

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