A Hymn of Hope

A Hymn of Hope

Her Ghost inside a star, so close and yet so far-

Her voice Angelic, Devils flee, with her arms embraces me-

Her song shine's light through blackened skies-

Her silver tears fall from turquoise eyes-

Hope ressurects and shatters Shadow-

Envigerates Oak, Elm, and Willow-

As Ruin flees, and Rust receeds-

The world breathes free in her song.

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Published on Friday, February 22, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

Inspired in part by an episode of Casshern Sins

Comments on "A Hymn of Hope"

A former member wrote: So beautiful, amazingly well written piece.. wow. Thanks for sharing your talent.
On Tuesday, February 26, 2013, lupus tenebrae (872) wrote:

I really liked the play on words, all with a different facet of hope, the play on colours, especially. Dealing in contrasts, like turquoise and shadow, and the receding rust almost seemed like an ocean. Seeing your posts again reminds me, I have some reading to do. Fine piece.
On Saturday, February 23, 2013, FadedBlues (2169) wrote:

...there's a lot of romance in this. the song & the face in the reachable distance...
A former member wrote: I get a sense of peace that took a while to come to the writer from this piece. I get a sense of timelessness from the second and third last lines that conveys the writers joy in that the loss they have is not lost as such but waiting to be recaptured.
On Friday, February 22, 2013, dwells (4285) wrote:

Guess she'll always be looking down on you then and much enjoyed the elemental nature of this tribute, thanks.
On Friday, February 22, 2013, Bashost (24) wrote:

So beautiful! I love this, i love the way it flows, i love the way it kind of builds momentum up 'till the end. Great poem!
A former member wrote: I loved it the feel of the power of peace in an angel fighting off darkness and demons beautifuly written look forward to reading more of your works
On Friday, February 22, 2013, Star (920) wrote:

oh so beautiful, im in awe by this... lovely work, little kitten :)