No Tears For Recompense
By cre
no tears for recompense
no path past degradation
no hand to guard your heart
no internal liberation
no sandman in reverse
no taking dreams away
no chance to breathe in peace
no time to have your say
no moment in the sun
no clarity revealed
no answer from a god
no sanctity of shield
For one thing that you always had,
Was bitter truth so sheer.
The dancing flames may call to you,
But it's always been too clear.
The shadows falling past the light,
In their slick elucidation,
Never offered gentle pardon,
Or hint of absolution.
no weeping eyes' atonement
no hope for expiation
no heart to bolster battles
no external indignation
no answer to the riddles
no cool of quenching thirst
no finding sanctuary
no elusion of their curse
For one thing that you never had,
Was asylum in the face,
Of evil far too strengthened,
To ever hope escape.
You hungered for the darkness,
And fostered obfuscation.
Though you knew there was no answer,
You clung to aberration.
You still hear the chant,
Though you wish it weren't so.
And the answer that you seek,
Will always end in "no".
Comments on "No Tears For Recompense"
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On Saturday, September 20, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
To exist beyond time, Raise your hand, The giftet shall be aware, And of gifts they recieve more then there share, Much more. Tiger
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A former member wrote:
"no weeping eyes' atonement" I love that. I love all of it. Beautiful. ^aura^
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A former member wrote:
I like it..great job...sounds like a Linkin Park song..hehe.
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On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
Quite a strage piece for me. I feel as though I am seeing it through I different perspective than the norm. I felt as though I were the character you were speaking to, whether good or bad. Wonderful piece.
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On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
I read this before, but couldn't muster the right words to leave here. And I still can't but you wanted a comment, so here it is! :-D Heh, but really, I love the way this one flows, and the word usage as kitty said, Great job.
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On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
woooo! AWESOME word usage, yummy to the Bastee! this skipped along like the ghost of a child in a mental asylum... mm. ::shivers::
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, Nomad
(38) wrote:
the phrase "sanctity of a shield" rings in my mind. ending's a bit of a letdown (maybe too overt?) but I enjoyed this a great deal.
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A former member wrote:
Nice
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
i dont really know what to say...i think i missed something but i think there is emotions glor behind this, nice job (sorry for any sp its too early)