mujer divina

By Taunting The Reaper

mujer divina

dame una noche

de tus noches

 

yo doy todo

me das nada

 

eres mi aire

pero me asfixias
 

pensar en ti

es un castigo dulce

mirarte

es tirar mi corazón al viento
 

besarte

es morir feliz


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(English version; not as good but for those who don't read Spanish I will at least try to translate)

divine woman
give me one night
of your many nights

I give you everything
you give me nothing

you are the very air I breathe
but you suffocate me

thinking about you
is the sweetest of torments
watching you is throwing my heart into the wind
kissing you
is like dying happily

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Copyright 2012 A Better Way To Die
Published on Thursday, February 2, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • NikesRain On Thursday, February 2, 2012, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    as faded said, it's beautiful in both languages... if i remember it reminds me of gibran... love... it caresses the most tender of your branches and will also shake your roots to trembling... lovely piece

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, February 2, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...beautiful in both languages...we get the torture along w/the ecstacy...but we wouldn't give it up...

  • dwells On Thursday, February 2, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Modo Mejor para Morirse - me encanta y muchimas gracias por etsa obra perfecta. Y tambien por la oportunidad de practicar mi espanol al mismo tiempo. Hasta luego.

  • natalie On Monday, March 19, 2012, natalie (3052)By person wrote:

    what dwells...:) i am impressed.

  • A former member wrote: Nice...I dig this. And ´spanish is beautiful.


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