Enters The Sun

By RubyXero

The darkness crept upon me...
as I begged you not to stay.
Spare yourself this tragedy...
of harshness and decay.

But with you, came the sun...
its brilliance shone right through me.
As I fought and struggled against it.
I fell down upon my knees.
I cannot deny this influence
puncturing me to my core.
If you sing any louder
I shall shutter and bleed once more.

So I pulled you close upon me
welcoming you into my glittered embrace
and you took to it so kindly
Love and Joy fully expressed on your face.
...But as you held me, you began to cringe
to shrink and fade away.
That once brilliant cover began to dull
as my night overcame
                                your day.

You fought and struggled against me,
begging for my release!!
But there is just one thing you don't understand,
my love.
For this is my solemn peace....

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Copyright 2012 RubyXero
Published on Sunday, January 8, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I really love this. You try to spare them but then you think their love will be enough, but unfortunately it is they that are consumed by ur darkness . Such a familiar undoing of someone once so beautiful and vibrant

  • blue angel On Thursday, May 23, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    I love this, but remember darkness flees from the light... briefly kissing in the twilight... I love the dominance in your words!!

  • Taunting The Reaper On Friday, January 13, 2012, Taunting The Reaper (169)By person wrote:

    I adore the not so subtle innuendo and staying true to yourself.

  • A former member wrote: Excellent, gave me such a beaútiful image.

  • A former member wrote: The ending was just perfect.

  • dwells On Sunday, January 8, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    So even an enraptured lover could not sway you from your predestiny perhaps? This was a gloomy ending to an initially hopeful and serene work, much enjoyed and don't be so glum chum!


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