Enters The Sun
By RubyXero
The darkness crept upon me...
as I begged you not to stay.
Spare
yourself this tragedy...
of harshness and decay.
But with
you, came the sun...
its brilliance shone right through me.
As
I fought and struggled against it.
I fell down upon my knees.
I
cannot deny this influence
puncturing me to my core.
If you sing
any louder
I shall shutter and bleed once more.
So I pulled
you close upon me
welcoming you into my glittered embrace
and
you took to it so kindly
Love and Joy fully expressed on your face.
...But as you held me, you began to cringe
to shrink and fade away.
That once brilliant cover began to dull
as my night overcame
your day.
You fought and struggled against me,
begging for my release!!
But there is just one thing you don't understand,
my love.
For
this is my solemn peace....
Comments on "Enters The Sun"
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A former member wrote:
I really love this. You try to spare them but then you think their love will be enough, but unfortunately it is they that are consumed by ur darkness . Such a familiar undoing of someone once so beautiful and vibrant
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
I love this, but remember darkness flees from the light... briefly kissing in the twilight... I love the dominance in your words!!
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On Friday, January 13, 2012, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
I adore the not so subtle innuendo and staying true to yourself.
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A former member wrote:
Excellent, gave me such a beaútiful image.
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A former member wrote:
The ending was just perfect.
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On Sunday, January 8, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
So even an enraptured lover could not sway you from your predestiny perhaps? This was a gloomy ending to an initially hopeful and serene work, much enjoyed and don't be so glum chum!