Spirits, Angels

By Aurora_Light

Spirits love me this I know
For my angel told me so.
She says I am brave and smart
And have a kind and caring heart.

Angels love me this I know
For the spirits told me so.
They say I have special gifts
In reading cards, and runes, and shit.

Angels, spirits hear my plea
Don't let my gift take over me.
I love the life I have right now
I can't lose it to wondering, how?

Spirits, angels hear my cry
Don't let life pass me by.
You say I have special gifts
I say I'm a normal unaverage kid.


Spirits love me this I know
For my angel told me so.
Angels love me this I know
For the spirits told me so.

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Copyright 2003 Amanda L. Mrozinski
Published on Friday, June 6, 2003.     Filed under: "Comedy" and "Poetry"
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  • Death On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Death (28)By person wrote:

    great write, i loved the flow. and Fallen is write, angels do love you

  • angelunderneath On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, angelunderneath (60)By person wrote:

    I LOVE THIS!!! How sweet!

  • cre On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, cre (411)By person wrote:

    Very nice write, I enjoyed reading. Good job.

  • The Fallen Angel On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, The Fallen Angel (235)By person wrote:

    Angels do love you

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 8, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    i must say tut tut, yet another great write. very cool.

  • Blood of Winter On Monday, August 4, 2003, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    Don't look at my cards, or my runes you wouldn't like what you see. Great write though.

  • The_Scavenger On Thursday, June 26, 2003, The_Scavenger (30)By person wrote:

    great write baby. it had rythm,and repeditiveness. Great poem

  • Litteratus On Saturday, June 7, 2003, Litteratus (42)By person wrote:

    I like it, esp. the humor in stating "in reading...and shit." On an editorial note, you meant "angels," not angles [lest this deals with some type of psychedelic geometric entity :-P]

  • Aurora_Light On Saturday, June 7, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    thanks for pointing that out me gonna go fix that now

  • maddin foxxxy On Friday, June 6, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    hmm..intresting...spirits have called 4 me 2...can read the cards also..jajaj..well done.

  • Rebel_Angel On Sunday, June 8, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    nicely put Tut Tut! Another great work

  • Aurora_Light On Monday, June 9, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    y thank u Rebel

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