Hachi Waits
By Gray Vision
~Inspired by a true story~
Hachi waits at the
train station
The dog waits for nine minutes
It’s after five
It’s time
And the professor doesn’t arrive
Hachi
waits for nine hours
Nine days
The professor is late
But
the dog doesn’t mind
At the train station he stays
Hachi waits for nine months
Nine years straight
He’s convinced
the professor is really late
But the dog doesn’t mind
At the
train station he stays
Tired of old age, not tired of
his long wait
Hachi finally closes his eyes
And finds his
friend
In his deepest dreams inside
At the end
But Hachi still waits
Even after he died
He waits
on the streets of every town
At all the neighborhood pounds
Under
the skin of every dog around
For someone to rescue him
To give him
A name
Water
Food
And a home
Where love abounds
~Written By Daniela Caride~
Author's Note:
This poem is based on a true story of a dog's loyalty to it's master. http://youtu.be/IfCNX7-RkbMComments on "Hachi Waits"
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On Monday, November 13, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
I remember when you first posted this... oh, how has it been seven years. Timeless
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On Sunday, February 23, 2014, Syncretism
(34) wrote:
Loved that movie, just as much as I loved this write! Good work!
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On Thursday, October 27, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Aweeee... Why you wana make the Devil cry? I gotta one to pick with you when you get back!!! There's gonna be furniture movin around..... Lol.....
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A former member wrote:
omg that was beautiful, i love dogs but my dad never allowed me to have me one:(. I loved this piece man..made me cry.Ooh i want a dogy NOW
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On Sunday, July 25, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
This write tends to have that affect of people myself included, it's an amazing story and movie, you should really look into checking it out some time. Thank you =)
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On Saturday, July 3, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
Excellent write GV, crazy dog
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On Sunday, July 4, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Everyone seems to think that I wrote this but it was written by Daniele Caride. A true story that really happened, thanks for commenting =)
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A former member wrote:
I don't know the movie, but you have left me quite sad... A moving poem, GV.
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
It's a sad movie but really you should check it out, it's different from the other dog movies I promise you that much. Thank you for checking it out though, I really appreciate it =)
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A former member wrote:
thanks for sharing man! :)
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Sure thing you be good now, take care =)
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Enigma
(90) wrote:
I remember watching that movie on a plane trip back from Hawaii..Sad but moving..Thanks for sharing
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Oh thank you sir for taking the time to check it out =)
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
That made me choke up a little man, the loyalty the dog shown is what a true friendship must be like, to be there for them when they're close, and to wait for them when they're gone, the ending was especially heart wrenching, well done my friend.
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Daniela Caride is the true hero here, bringing this piece to life so that we can all read and savor this master piece. I'm just the picket in hopes that all can check it out and hopefully watch the movie. Thank you for the comment wolfy, I really appreciate it =)
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On Sunday, July 8, 2012, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
I neglected to tell you after all this time, I finally got to see the movie at least a year ago. I'm not afraid to admit, it had me crumpled up on the couch, sobbing. It must have been just what the doctor ordered.