If Only

By Gray Vision

Maybe it’s a coincidence
or maybe it’s faith,
I happened to stumble
upon such a cute face,
Such beauty and passion
that’s hard to come by,
Such generosity and kindness
in such a short time,
Dazzling smile
that can stretch a mile,
And all this time
you’ve been running wild,
Here at my fingertips
but miles apart,
Longing for the day when
i can disembark, for
Inside her castle, rests an amazing heart,
that’s strong and true, where love,
Abounds.

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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Monday, June 28, 2010.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"

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  • ColorMeToxic On Monday, March 26, 2012, ColorMeToxic (238)By person wrote:

    This is so very sweet. She sure sounds special. :) Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Monday, March 26, 2012, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    She is as a matter of fact you all are. Thank you for all for dropping by =)

  • XOCHITL On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, XOCHITL (40)By person wrote:

    Well done! I like you style

  • Gray Vision On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Thank you and welcome to Dp =)

  • A former member wrote: how very moving, a reflection of what's good and true between two people, a gentle blossom and the promise of something epically beautiful.. your heart is so full of ways to inspire..

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    I am so late on my responces lol, goodness, well better later than never I guess. Thank you so much for you insight on this peice I really appreciate it =)

  • A former member wrote: Love is in the air....you lucky @#$. Read that to her and she is all yours;) Oh i am sorry for being me;) But seriously dude nice write and thanks for sharing :)

  • Gray Vision On Sunday, July 25, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Heh I love you're enthusiasm in this comment, she knows though, I've already presented this piece to her and yes she does like it. Thanks again =)

  • A former member wrote: I love when fate brings us to the right place and we are then blessed to meet someone who will impact our lives forever. Sweet write. =)

  • Gray Vision On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Everyone we meet impacts our lives in some way, some more so than others but they all pave the path to finding that one person who would and could change things drastically, this includes you KS, thank you for such a heart warming comment =)

  • lupus tenebrae On Monday, June 28, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    A heartwarming tribute, and it gave me one of the biggest headaches last night lol, well done though. Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Monday, June 28, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Sure thing bud, um wolfy heh, thank you for commenting =)

  • A former member wrote: This was a cute tribute. ...here at my fingertips, but miles apart... I love that part. Good write, my friend, good write. :)

  • Gray Vision On Monday, June 28, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much Miss, I'm glad you liked it but reading it was half the fun, there's more heh, enjoy =)

  • A Life Without You On Monday, June 28, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    excellent, a beautiful write

  • Gray Vision On Monday, June 28, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much =)

  • A Life Without You On Monday, June 28, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    Ah-ha, I just figured out who the lucky lady is... very clever my friend, very clever!

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