Transparency

By Gray Vision

It hurts at times
To verbalize,
What truly goes on Deep inside,
It hurts at times
To realize,
That all you speak,
Are nothing more but lies
It hurts at times,
To sympathize
With those that refuse to realize,
That there are those out there,
That recognize,
The battles waging,
Deep inside,
But it's only a matter of time,
Before you realize,
That the one(s) who really care about you,
Are right before, 
Your very eyes.

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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Friday, April 23, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

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  • A Life Without You On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    Excellent write. Smooth. Moral high ground.

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Thanks brotha, that's right I said it, hope to catch you on here some time, i've been gone for to long it seems. Thanks again for commenting on this piece =)

  • crius42 On Sunday, June 27, 2010, crius42 (7)By person wrote:

    Amazing piece, Your words seem to hold a lot truth behind them.

  • Gray Vision On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    If my works can resonate some or any sort of emotion or feeling from my readers then my work is done. Thank you for commenting on this piece, I greatly appreciate it =)

  • lupus tenebrae On Thursday, June 17, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    That was a nice write, it's true too people don't seem to notice that the people who cared all along were right in front of them, well done. Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Wolfy it's always a pleasure reading your comments bud, keep up the good work yourself and thank you for your interpetation on this piece =)

  • charliebrown On Friday, April 23, 2010, charliebrown (22)By person wrote:

    good write

  • Gray Vision On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much, I appreciate it =)

  • A former member wrote: That is just simply amazing i love it.

  • Gray Vision On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much MDS, much love to you to =)

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