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Transparency
By Gray Vision
It hurts at times
To verbalize,
What truly
goes on Deep inside,
It hurts at times
To
realize,
That all you speak,
Are nothing more
but lies
It hurts at times,
To sympathize
With
those that refuse to realize,
That there are those out there,
That recognize,
The battles waging,
Deep
inside,
But it's only a matter of time,
Before
you realize,
That the one(s) who really care about you,
Are right before,
Your very eyes.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Friday, April 23, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
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Comments on "Transparency"
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, A Life Without You
(146)
wrote:
Excellent write. Smooth. Moral high ground.
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thanks brotha, that's right I said it, hope to catch you on here some time, i've been gone for to long it seems. Thanks again for commenting on this piece =)
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, crius42
(7) wrote:
Amazing piece, Your words seem to hold a lot truth behind them.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
If my works can resonate some or any sort of emotion or feeling from my readers then my work is done. Thank you for commenting on this piece, I greatly appreciate it =)
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On Thursday, June 17, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
That was a nice write, it's true too people don't seem to notice that the people who cared all along were right in front of them, well done.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Wolfy it's always a pleasure reading your comments bud, keep up the good work yourself and thank you for your interpetation on this piece =)
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On Friday, April 23, 2010, charliebrown
(22) wrote:
good write
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you very much, I appreciate it =)
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A former member wrote:
That is just simply amazing i love it.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you so much MDS, much love to you to =)
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