Sanctuary from Time

By Stranger

Beside my ankle
Upon the tip of a tall, thin blade of grass
A ladybug delights in
Its misunderstanding of gravity

Above me a mighty oak
Stretches out an arm to hold
A thick, weatherworn rope
That is keeping a tractor tire from touching the ground

All around me
Sunlight filtered through trees
Covers the ground like luminous confetti

There is a puddle directly in front of me
I catch a glimpse of my reflection in it
As a dry leaf touches down lightly on its surface

A black and yellow bird
Begins to sing a single note

An acorn hangs in the air
Suspended mid-fall

I do not move
For fear of shattering the moment

*****

"This may be just what you are looking for,"
Tells a saleswoman
To an old man in a wheelchair

"It is an original watercolor
Titled: The Image of Youth"

"It was painted in 1937;
But it has a timeless quality
Wouldn't you agree?"

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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Friday, May 16, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I remember that scene from my childhood. Very beautiful. You desribed it perfectly.

  • Mistress Morbid On Friday, March 5, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    So many colors, and soo vivid

  • Jonas On Monday, July 21, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    oh wow! alone, the first section of the poem is excellent, a frozen moment, carbon frozen, shining... but the conversation lends such a strange twist, like growing old and browsing memories that will never come again...

  • Jonas On Monday, July 21, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    finality is the sense i get... tingles i get too... this was just breathtaking

  • manywalks On Thursday, June 12, 2003, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Sorry I missed this gem sooner; so beautiful and moving. ~ mw

  • Delphoid-Q On Thursday, June 12, 2003, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much for reminding me of what is really important in life. I love this poem in every way.

  • DoctorAsh On Monday, May 19, 2003, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    oh .. i like these very much um yup ... i felt like i was right there with you . amazing discpritive ..

  • CharlottesWeb On Saturday, May 17, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    OH...thankyou for posting this one. Beautiful...good refreshing feelings. ~DW~

  • GothicBlack On Friday, May 16, 2003, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    Nature is one of the hardest things to capture on paper, i find. you managed to capture this talent, and the poem turned out perfect. ~gothic~

  • urbanhumility On Friday, May 16, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    your poem is docile in "nature" it is nice to know that others can stand still in time and notice these beautiful moments, and actully write them poetic, to paper...............urban

  • Aurora_Light On Friday, May 16, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    nice i like it

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