you wear it well.....
By urbanhumility
"there is nothing i can tell you......
you look good when you wear well"
from the distance....i see..... a man with a good look, a in beautiful
force made by an enchanting smile...
good nature...
good karma...
delivering the intention that leads to inner peace.....
"wear it well"
who would have know tradgety has been on cuff of your shirt...
who would have known all that you love has faded and turned away......
who would have known that "despair" gave birth to your intellect.....
you look good when you wear it well.....
the secret well sewn in your heart........from a god or goddess.....
you will travel far....
you will know things others will never know....
happiness will caress your dreams.....
you are a bright star, that seems ancient and learned.....
"there is nothing i can tell you, you look good when you wear it well"
may "you" see what i see...
Comments on "you wear it well....."
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On Monday, November 7, 2011, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
I missed reading your works....the purity, grace and wisdom in your words...I see your higher self is doing an amazing job.
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A former member wrote:
I always find that particular line like yours "wear it well", even when I'm half asleep I'll have all these incredible lines flowing through my mind and if I dont get up to write them down, I'll have lost them in the morning.
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On Saturday, May 29, 2010, Qurious
(40) wrote:
Urban, I absolutely 100% loved this. Excellent write.
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A former member wrote:
This was awesome! =)
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On Tuesday, August 11, 2009, Gideon Lost
(137) wrote:
This speaks of dignity and wisdom. Thank you for sharing. -Gideon
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On Saturday, July 11, 2009, disposable
(103) wrote:
my take on this was more of the angle of outward appearance and the contradiction of whats behind that clothing curtain. very interesting write-not only is it well written but it is telling of the author. write on...
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On Tuesday, May 19, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
This is utterly brilliant. I love the flow and the direction. It is positive in spirit. Outstanding.
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A former member wrote:
lucky them....wow
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On Tuesday, January 27, 2009, palenoble
(46) wrote:
This is tasty. It has a beautiful texture that leaves inner mist. Thanks for sharing. -noble_
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On Thursday, January 22, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
i like how you end your poems. i like how you structure your poems, too. they just sound and feel important. this poem has some significance to me, also..nice write...-l-
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A former member wrote:
Hey, write more!!peace
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A former member wrote:
amazing as always. ~ hdb.
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A former member wrote:
This is truly astounding. Your poetic sight seems to stretch past the typical peripherals... and your voice in this... musical.
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On Friday, December 26, 2008, ColourGod
(43) wrote:
This is a very good poem. It reads like it felt good to write it. Thanks for sharing it. And I second After hours comment.
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On Saturday, November 29, 2008, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
This is very intense. I rarely get visions like the one I just had after reading this piece. I feel inspired. I owe that to you.. thank you ~669~
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A former member wrote:
Eat chure heart out Rod! "A little out of time but I don't mind" Seriously, I get the sense of facetiousness here, not quite sarcasm, but perhaps a little tongue-in-cheek. The notion of distance... the cuff, which is somehow not the most evident of features, and the notion that happiness touches the dream, where the *tragedy* of the past is hidden behind a mask... Nietzsche says that the profound are always masked... and the facetiousness here, well, that seems profound... why is it that the beloved has faded and turned away? And yet, is it not despair that churns beneath each of us... driving us forward to avoid the abyss forming at our heals? Very well textured, love the layers... a vivid work of art. and should I say.... very well done!
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2008, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
mmmmmm...i like this.
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A former member wrote:
Been waiting for this brother,....those that believe..and encompass the energy around us have a way of reading the 'ayre' which that we breath,..to be conscious of your own existence allows a tapping of 'times before'...hence an inner understanding of a much bigger picture that unfolds before our very eyes....your one of those.
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2008, TheUltimateOutlaw
(43) wrote:
I liked this. I thought it was interesting. Kinda a juxtaposition of tragedy and virtue... and how one can bring about the other.