Inspiration

By Aurora_Light

I've lost my inspiration,
My muse has gone and fled.
All my thoughts are jumbled,
They just won't come out of my head.
I can't write what I feel,
It just doesn't feel right.
To first write of hate and death,
And than the love of my life.
This is all your fault you know,
Because of the way you make me feel.
When I'm rapped up in your arms at night,
Happiness is all I seem to feel.
But then when I'm not with you,
And everyone is screaming,
It feels like my world is falling apart.
And writing is the only way I had of dealing,
But now because of you I no longer can,
Because I can't write of death,
Not after holding your hand.

This was writen for a man I once loved.

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Copyright 2003 Amanda L. Mrozinski
Published on Sunday, May 11, 2003.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "because i can't write of death, not after holding your hand."--- i liked that.

  • angelunderneath On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, angelunderneath (60)By person wrote:

    (in not so many words) I was once told that when you feel like you are uninspired sometimes that is inspiration enough...I think you can see that in this

  • A former member wrote: Wow, the last line is perfect. I give it a 10! ~SG

  • Dayer On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    same here, great job

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 8, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    like i said, stick w/ kat. u deserve the best, and he's it. you're really lucky.

  • Delphoid-Q On Thursday, June 12, 2003, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    Well done, i think we have all been through a lul at some point... I'm glad you have found your muse. Great poem.

  • DoctorAsh On Monday, May 19, 2003, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    wow .. this is potent. now that you've seen the true beauty, its hard to see anything less. Much Respect.

  • The_Scavenger On Wednesday, May 14, 2003, The_Scavenger (30)By person wrote:

    Great poem. I have recently found that inspiration as well. A like you and I are. I too have lost that "muse" but have found a new shine of light. Your man is lucky to have you. just make sure he is deserving...

  • IceDragoness On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, IceDragoness (193)By person wrote:

    I think you've been inspired without you knowing it, and you're lucky to have your times of happiness i'm happy for you ~Dawn

  • A former member wrote: Inspiration rocks... yet when it's gone... it bites... great write

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