please kill the clown
By Taunting The Reaper
muffled voices fade gently
but the message remains
even as the deer becomes road kill
a clown fakes a smile
and children;
born of laughter
believe all is well
the light is dimming for an old man
but a smile dances accross his face
he was born of laughter too
even though the the muffled voice speaks clearly
to him now
still he smiles
and despite the fact that the imbecile clown has fallen
from a pedestal of blind youth
with a mock smile
with mock cheer
but no song
the old man glows
with rythym in his step
he can hear them now
his journey has slathered him
in the music of ages
and he laughs a true laugh
because it doesn't take a clown
to bring laughter
instead a mix of moxy and imagination
will do just fine
can you hear them, old man?
I can see you smiling
but allow me this last request
when they call your number
tell them to take the clown instead
Comments on "please kill the clown"
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On Thursday, October 25, 2012, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
Never trust a clown...Good poem.
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, DarkDruidess
(326) wrote:
this was perfect...just what I wanted to read thank you *bows*
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On Sunday, September 21, 2008, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
it is so rarely that we find a truely happy person. most of us just bitch, moan, and complain about things that, in actuality, don't mean a damn thing of importance. I loved the end. Take the facade instead of the genuine... but then the genuine is ready for something better whereas the clown still has so much learning to do. if he could
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Great write--clowns are creepy!
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A former member wrote:
this is gorgeous and reminds me of that damned clown pennywise. great write. ^_^
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On Wednesday, July 16, 2008, Sketso
(435) wrote:
Mort au clown! Son sourire est la faux! What a piece of work... so many images, so many thoughts, for personal reasons, this work stuck and made me laugh (perhaps in a maniacal sense) through tears long since bottled.
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A former member wrote:
definately a fave of yours. ~ hdb.
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A former member wrote:
All the things that make up our life with a hindsight view...ponder on this one...intrigues.