Lonely Nights

By Daughter_Of_The_Moon

You don't know what you do to me
The way you make me feel
The way I long for you
especialy when you're not there
I fall asleep every night
wishing you had your arms around me
but you're not there
the way you do the smallest things
but it still sends shivers through me
just lightly kissing me
makes me wish you didn't have to leave
when I feel your hand on my back
I know eveything is going to be O.K.
Until you leave again,
to see you everyday
knowing you want the same
And not being able to have it
tortures me all the more
I wish you didn't have to leave
not again
Another lonely night without you
thats all I have anymore

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Copyright 2003 Daughter_Of_The_Moon
Published on Wednesday, May 7, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Its like I am hearing it from a loved one longing for my return. It pulled my heartstrings so hard

  • Army Barbie On Sunday, April 1, 2007, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    Man do I know this like the back of my hand. And I'm sorry anyone has to go through this. I'd rather take everyone's hurt on than let someone else feel the pain of someone leaving. Lovely darlin.

  • Jaded Ireland On Tuesday, June 20, 2006, Jaded Ireland (26)By person wrote:

    I've only been a couple days without my boyfirend and this poem makes me miss him so much. Good write but now I'm in a pathetic mood.

  • The Fallen Angel On Saturday, October 11, 2003, The Fallen Angel (235)By person wrote:

    Painful read...loneliness brings me to the reality of my worth+Fallen One+

  • urbanhumility On Friday, October 3, 2003, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    despair incarnate; you have written this heartache for us all, and you have done very well, well said.....my friend....urban

  • Blinded_Tiger On Sunday, August 17, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    I liked this alot. Complex in writing and feeling. The best ive read of you so far. Very good.

  • Drea On Sunday, August 17, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    yeah, this one hit a lil too close to home. i know the feel that you have so painfully yet beautifully expressed..amazing ~Drea~

  • urbanhumility On Friday, August 8, 2003, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    you have hit upon a subject that touched upon, but you did it so well...your words , your feeling........ urban

  • hate_doll On Tuesday, June 10, 2003, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    I know exactly what you're going through...I could feel every word of this poem...as markus said, loneliness is torture...good write...

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Tuesday, June 10, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    I really like this. I know the feeling. Keep up the good work!

  • Seraphic On Tuesday, May 20, 2003, Seraphic (209)By person wrote:

    and again...sad, but such torture written so beautifully...

  • A former member wrote: It's torture to be alone. Moving poem.

  • DoctorAsh On Thursday, May 8, 2003, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    very sad . i hate feeling that way . it can be so ... painful sometimes

  • diavolessa On Wednesday, May 7, 2003, diavolessa (208)By person wrote:

    sad... I felt like that before! I sure can relate! good poem! :)


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