Growing Up...

By SnowQueen

Child in the playground sitting in the sand
Adult on the street corner waving a taxi with her hand
Child in awe at all the world has to offer
Adult too caught up in work to even bother
Child letting its laughter echo through the sky
Adult gets home from work and loosens up his tie
Child with no cares or a thing to worry about
Adult worrying constantly making themselves stressed-out
Child too content with the present to think of what comes next
Adult makes even the simplest situations overly complex
Child taking a walk down his favorite street
Adult, driving and talking on cell phone- trying to be discrete
Child looks around and thinks the road is clear
Adult, still talking, speeds up and shifts gears
Child sees the perfect opportunity to walk
Adult driving faster now and continuing to talk
Child struck by a corvette
Adult- still unaware of the damage she’s done yet
Child- dead- “it happened so fast , he didn’t feel any pain”
Adult stumbling over words and trying to explain
Child is a pile of blood, organs, and broken bones
Adult, hears a distant voice and hangs up her cell phone
Child, life over, one less member of a family
Adult... discovers she’s what’s wrong with humanity

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Copyright 2003 SnowQueen
Published on Tuesday, April 15, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: makes you stop and think. leason learned

  • A former member wrote: damn...the ending just hit too hard..wow

  • BoldSolitude On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    man this started off making you long for the innocence of childhood and then turned into something twisted. Good all around message though.

  • A former member wrote: Great poem..I enjoyed reading it..excellent.-Thomas

  • IceDragoness On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, IceDragoness (195)By person wrote:

    It took me a bit to realize that the child and adult weren't together, it's so sad how those things you said are true though, good job with it ^.^ ~Dawn

  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Friday, April 18, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106)By person wrote:

    wondefully written. Tells the truth and brutality of this world, everyones too wrapped up in their own lives to see what pain they cause.

  • A former member wrote: i love this, great work

  • A former member wrote: Its a good poem of seeing two different points of view. Very well written.

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful. Nice to see someone commenting on the loss of innocence we all have to eventually go through.

  • Bloodofdeadpoets On Tuesday, April 15, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55)By person wrote:

    veyr nice poem, very original, thanks for sharing

  • SnowQueen On Tuesday, April 15, 2003, SnowQueen (59)By person wrote:

    I tried to fix the mistakes but it won't changE! bahh...

  • Stranger On Tuesday, April 15, 2003, Stranger (264)By person wrote:

    Excellent. Well thought out with an important message. Keep them coming.

  • A former member wrote: Great poem! Very creative and honest! I really enjoyed reading this peice.

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