and when...

By KittyStryker






and when you look at me
from across the room
and think i'm the most beautiful thing
you've seen

please tell me that

even if it's not actually true







and when you kiss me
please do it with a passion
that makes global warming
seem like a minor heat







and when you hold me
please hold me tightly
til i almost cannot breathe-

draw me close enough
so that every breath, every inhalation
is scented with you





and when you whisper
"i love you" into my ear
please let it mean just that
and not "i love you;
now change into someone else
for me"





and when we fuck
when you grunt and heave and thrust your way
into my core
please let me roll over and go to sleep



i want you to fuck me til i'm too tired to talk
anyway



and when we fight

please hit me above the belt
and i'll try to do the same for you
and we'll make up, kiss
and fight again












and when you think it won't
work out



please reconsider

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Copyright 2005 Bast
Published on Tuesday, April 5, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • SummerCoat On Sunday, March 4, 2012, SummerCoat (29)By person wrote:

    oh how i felt your words...

  • Gideon Lost On Tuesday, August 4, 2009, Gideon Lost (138)By person wrote:

    Revisiting....amazing. I am still alive. -Gideon

  • Mari On Sunday, January 13, 2008, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    so simple. but so honest and polite. rock on

  • Lynaes On Saturday, December 15, 2007, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    That ending murdered me.

  • A former member wrote: a very moving, touching and emotional poem. I loved it.

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    hehe...this makes me feel more alone than i already did...but its a fabulous piece of writing

  • murder_in_clubland On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    Awww I should show Ryan this....How sweet...~xXx

  • kisserott_death On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, kisserott_death (47)By person wrote:

    Wow this is amazing...I really like this...-takes all of this into concideration-...

  • Gideon Lost On Tuesday, April 5, 2005, Gideon Lost (138)By person wrote:

    "Tell me no secrets, tell me some lies . . ." Gosh I love your work Basty. You write from such a place we all remember being there. Thanks for sharing. P.S. I still have your number. :O)

  • Gideon Lost On Tuesday, April 5, 2005, Gideon Lost (138)By person wrote:

    P.S. FAVS!!

  • purr_verse On Tuesday, April 5, 2005, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    Fantastic write. I felt every moment. The passion you write with, and with such original clarity, is magnificent.


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