Comments by ShardsofSilence
- "wow..I really like that, despite how disturbing it was, it was quite entertaining. Hah. Must come back and read this again when I'm more awake ^^"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Nursrey Rhymes" by mywristshurt
- "I half like and half dislike the rhyme. Like because it makes reading it easy, dislike because it seems to limit your words; I felt there could be more to add to this...but it's a good write nonetheless."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Formidable Desire" by Temerity
- "honestly speaking, what you're trying to say is beautiful, but I feel it being drowned out by the lack of emotion in your words? Then again, I'm writing this at a queer hour and my mind is most likely completely off it's rocker, but that's my honest opini"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "My World" by Muses_Love
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