It can't rain all the time

By Draven

Two lovers deaths
as five shadows curse their lives
a year goes by
and from the grave springs life
vengence in a nights time
a painted face and
one by one they fall
like raidrops in the storm
one who shouldnt have played with knives
another was a drug overlord
one wanted to get high one last time,
a wish granted out of mercy
one who no longer walks,
well not with his feet anyway
and finally the last one
the ruler of all the death
loved his car and now is charred

a little girl whose mom is saved
a dirty pawn shop up in flames
now a man walks through the cemetary
just to be home
blood drips from his wounds
and the rain falls softly on his head
one last smile

"It can't rain all the time..."

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Copyright 2005 Draven
Published on Thursday, February 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ShardsofSilence On Sunday, October 1, 2006, ShardsofSilence (219)By person wrote:

    :)

  • Angst Queen On Tuesday, July 5, 2005, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    You caught "The Crow" perfectly. I'm impressed. The whole story in such little time. Very well done

  • Gideon Lost On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, Gideon Lost (137)By person wrote:

    Yikes! What a story you have painted man. Great style here.

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful *sigh* Great work

  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, February 11, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    this write squeezes out the last ounce of emotion i have left in my heart..i loved this.. and i thank you greatly for sharing this with us unworthy people..hehe...~AoD

  • island warrior On Friday, February 11, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed this immensely, excellent write

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