A Break up Poem For Stupid Rob

By rondant

We're losing time, me and you
Let's give it up and say we're through
I have nothing to lose, not even my pride
My inner soul has already died
I don't ever smile, I just frown
Because all you do is bring me down
Maybe I should listen to all my friends
They will be there at the end
This break up was long overdue
So here it goes...I'm through




I wrote this for my best friend Sarah. She's in a very bad relationship and doesn't know how to end it..I thoughtthis would help.

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Copyright 2004 rondant
Published on Thursday, December 16, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dei On Monday, October 8, 2012, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    Awe, I may need to borrow this and read it word for word. lol Thanks

  • A former member wrote: YEAH! I love it! That was fuckin awsome!

  • A former member wrote: You tell 'em, Ronda!

  • Silent Assassin On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Silent Assassin (108)By person wrote:

    I think this would help her very much. Very well said.

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