sad again

By so_skeevy

All the world is crashing beneath my weary feet,
Soon I will fall down into the hell beneath.
I feel like I can’t take this, I need to end this ache
Love, life, hope, to me it all seems fake.
Please don’t ask why I need to cry
I shouldn’t take for granted all the times I wished I’d die.
And I know you’ll never understand the torments that I feel
But the secrets of my life must always be concealed.
The demons of my past are creeping close behind,
And I can only hope to keep them all confined.
And always in my dreams they are relived again,
Each night when I go to sleep, the torture will begin.
And I know you’d all leave me, if you only knew my past
Which is why ill keep it hidden, as long as I can last.

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Copyright 2004 so_skeevy
Published on Friday, April 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • AniDayz On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    this speaks so fucking clearly.tho the past is the past it runs deep, until you can find a way of dealing, than these feelings youve etched out will keep coming up. i know from experience.forgive me if im preaching here.

  • A former member wrote: omigod-it's like you've been a fly on my wall-luv it-luv it

  • A former member wrote: WOW, hmmm. Ok, don't know what to say. But that is a good thing, especially when a very good piece like this is comes along.

  • Spikes_of_Blue On Thursday, July 8, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue (42)By person wrote:

    great write...beautiful imagery...i love it...you know i wouldnt leave...

  • DarkDruidess On Friday, April 23, 2004, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    The desperation in the piece is tangible...good work...But maybe not everyone would leave if they knew...

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