I dont know...

By Spikes_of_Blue

I dont know how to live this life,
dont know what to do,
everyone else is looking for money,
or somebody else to screw,
but thats not how I want to live,
not who I want to be,
and when I look at my reflection,
thats not who I want to see.

I only know that I dont,
that I dont know what I want,
I'm quite a complex guy,
but still have nothing to flaunt,
and I dont know what I'm doing,
cause Im living without a goal,
without a hope, without a dream,
a man without his soul.

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Published on Thursday, August 14, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "I dont know..."

A former member wrote: this seemed like your content being lost. not always a bad thing :) i like this write.
On Saturday, January 1, 2005, Dei (663) wrote:

you'll find what your looking for. its human nature. We are seekers. We dont always have to know what we are looking for until after we've found it.
On Sunday, April 25, 2004, so_skeevy (64) wrote:

maybe you are one of the few with a soul...those not looking for the material values....awesome piece. my favorite that you've written!
On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106) wrote:

Agreed, Most look for what life is not about. You just need to find what it is in your life that matters. Great write. -Heather-
On Monday, September 1, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321) wrote:

I have to agree w/ both Velvet and Oleander...they are both so very true!
A former member wrote: Wow this poem is so awesome i wish i could write that well!
On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Clementine (121) wrote:

reading this poem doenst really convey any complexity to your character...forced rhyme and this topic are rather over played
On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Life is futile. Now it's time to die. Not really...
On Thursday, August 14, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434) wrote:

part of the fun of life is learning along the way...I have a goal...to find a goal!! *winx*~Vel~
A former member wrote: I dont think anyone here knows how to live this life sweetie...but good work!