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I dont know...
By Spikes_of_Blue
I dont know how to live this life,
dont know what to do,
everyone else is looking for money,
or somebody else to screw,
but thats not how I want to live,
not who I want to be,
and when I look at my reflection,
thats not who I want to see.
I only know that I dont,
that I dont know what I want,
I'm quite a complex guy,
but still have nothing to flaunt,
and I dont know what I'm doing,
cause Im living without a goal,
without a hope, without a dream,
a man without his soul.
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Copyright 2003 Spikes_of_Blue
Published on Thursday, August 14, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
this seemed like your content being lost. not always a bad thing :) i like this write.
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On Saturday, January 1, 2005, Dei
(665)
wrote:
you'll find what your looking for. its human nature. We are seekers. We dont always have to know what we are looking for until after we've found it.
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
maybe you are one of the few with a soul...those not looking for the material values....awesome piece. my favorite that you've written!
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On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon
(106) wrote:
Agreed, Most look for what life is not about. You just need to find what it is in your life that matters. Great write. -Heather-
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I have to agree w/ both Velvet and Oleander...they are both so very true!
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A former member wrote:
Wow this poem is so awesome i wish i could write that well!
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Clementine
(121) wrote:
reading this poem doenst really convey any complexity to your character...forced rhyme and this topic are rather over played
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Life is futile. Now it's time to die. Not really...
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
part of the fun of life is learning along the way...I have a goal...to find a goal!! *winx*~Vel~
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A former member wrote:
I dont think anyone here knows how to live this life sweetie...but good work!
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