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Formidable Desire
By Temerity
Tell me what you're searching for as you look into my eyes.
Do you see me as I really am? Or just an old disguise?
I kneel & cut myself for you so you can watch me bleed,
But does it really satisfy your insatiable need?
Lift me up and hold me, I am small in your hand.
Whisper all the darkest desires of a man.
Pronate, educate, mold me to your will
Trembling in your aftermath, I am standing still.
Show me your omniscience, all that I should fear.
You are my desire, ...I am still right here.____
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© 2006 Temerity
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On Monday, October 2, 2006, Temerity
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wrote:
Thank you ShardsofSilence, and I agree that it is limited. This one was far too personal in its origins, and I never completed it. I submitted it to determine if it was worth a finish. ;)
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On Thursday, December 14, 2006, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
If it still holds great potential, I believe it is definitely worth a finish :)
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On Monday, October 2, 2006, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
I half like and half dislike the rhyme. Like because it makes reading it easy, dislike because it seems to limit your words; I felt there could be more to add to this...but it's a good write nonetheless.
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