A Distant Embrace
By Fading_Smile
Proximity
and
loneliness
are relative to the distance
the heart has fleeted
from the remnants
of
one's
self
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© 2006 Fading_Smile
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A former member wrote:
Remember . Just because your on Darkpoetry doesnt mean it has to be dark. Back to the writing. The Feeling of being so close to someone yet so far apart is such a saddening thing. Why stay with the person if the bad out weighs the good? ][ ][
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On Monday, October 16, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
you've changed your writing style a bit.. i like what you used to put on here
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On Sunday, September 10, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
(69) wrote:
ther is nothing distant about the way you wrapped my heart in poetry and left me hopelessly enamoured.darn you and your amazing ninja writing skills.you shan't be kidnapped, i won't allow it. i like what you write too much.
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On Sunday, September 10, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
And yet, no matter what the heart will always continue to love. This was beyond greatness m'dear. You humble me. Julia~
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On Saturday, September 9, 2006, Lady Grinning Soul
(143) wrote:
very beyond what i expected. brilliant work, and i agree with Beth on this one. love doesnt die because the people are far apart.
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A former member wrote:
Very intriguing write. - HK
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On Saturday, September 9, 2006, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
intriguing
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A former member wrote:
Oh, kid! So far beyond.
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A former member wrote:
Ah, the truth of the fact that even if distance separates a pair of yearning hearts, the love will never disappear without reason. Brilliant piece. ~*Beth*~