A Distant Embrace

By Fading_Smile

Proximity
and
loneliness

are relative to the distance

the heart has fleeted
from the remnants

of

one's

self

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© 2006 Fading_Smile
Published on Saturday, September 9, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Remember . Just because your on Darkpoetry doesnt mean it has to be dark. Back to the writing. The Feeling of being so close to someone yet so far apart is such a saddening thing. Why stay with the person if the bad out weighs the good? ][ ][

  • mywristshurt On Monday, October 16, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    you've changed your writing style a bit.. i like what you used to put on here

  • BroKen-GlaSSHeArT On Sunday, September 10, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT (69)By person wrote:

    ther is nothing distant about the way you wrapped my heart in poetry and left me hopelessly enamoured.darn you and your amazing ninja writing skills.you shan't be kidnapped, i won't allow it. i like what you write too much.

  • TaintedButterfly On Sunday, September 10, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    And yet, no matter what the heart will always continue to love. This was beyond greatness m'dear. You humble me. Julia~

  • Lady Grinning Soul On Saturday, September 9, 2006, Lady Grinning Soul (143)By person wrote:

    very beyond what i expected. brilliant work, and i agree with Beth on this one. love doesnt die because the people are far apart.

  • A former member wrote: Very intriguing write. - HK

  • ShardsofSilence On Saturday, September 9, 2006, ShardsofSilence (219)By person wrote:

    intriguing

  • A former member wrote: Oh, kid! So far beyond.

  • A former member wrote: Ah, the truth of the fact that even if distance separates a pair of yearning hearts, the love will never disappear without reason. Brilliant piece. ~*Beth*~

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