A thousand ways to bleed
By BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
some roses are born black,
more fragile than the rest.
i tried my best to love you
-i was too young to know how.
sometimes i thought;
you just might be the death of me.
i know not how to live
-in a world without you.
i haven't slept,haven't laughed;
since i can't remember when.
i never forgot your taste;
and the time i wasted,
taught me that loving in vain
-is the sweetest of agonies.
i am haunted by memory;
plagued by rose-colored nostalgia,
transcending the casualties.
because all is fair in love and war.
Ive found a thousand ways to bleed;
how to forget you nobody knows.
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© 2006 BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
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A former member wrote:
This is so nice, it gave me chills! Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
your title grabbed me and the rest to follow is pure beauty in sorrow.
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A former member wrote:
Nice love piece of the follies of loving that person that will never love you back.
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On Monday, October 30, 2006, manicheism
(43) wrote:
Nice work, great closing.
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On Saturday, September 9, 2006, Carnapharnelia
(14) wrote:
Lovely. "sometimes i thought; you just might be the death of me. i know not how to live -in a world without you." This particular verse hit me.
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A former member wrote:
I love the second verse. It hits me deep.
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On Wednesday, August 9, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
lovely, my dear.
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On Tuesday, August 8, 2006, Fading_Smile
(29) wrote:
ok, this is one of the best fucking poems on this whole site, i mean, ive read it many times over the last few months, and its just so powerful, yet so steady. its amazing, it really is ~Blake~
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On Monday, July 24, 2006, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
when you least expect it or when another gets it .. i for got without trying to forget. nice work by the way. *) 669
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A former member wrote:
for some reason this one reminded me of my first girlfriend (the first 2 stanzas)I felt as if she were taling to me. That was a long time ago. powerful writing from the heart
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A former member wrote:
I love this!!! Very nice work!!!