As Beautiful As These Moments Are...Their Evil When Their Gone..

By waterchica999

As we sit here
holding our tattered hands
I wonder what you did wrong to deserve this,
as our eyes flood our faces,
I can not think straight,
This time it was different
like nothing that could ever have been promised,
now as you slowly die,
I remember this step,
you are not the last to leave
those horrible footsteps across my breast,
I've learned to say Hello,
yet the Good bye's always seem
to get stuck in my chest
as the time grows near
I start to breathe Ice,
not wanting this pain
that bleeds in my veins,
your not even gone and I miss you so much...
Now the bird chimes from the witches tower
and they sing
our last hour....

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© 2006 Frozen Rose
Published on Wednesday, July 26, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • ArcticWolf999 On Tuesday, December 6, 2011, ArcticWolf999 (62)By person wrote:

    Not my usual style of comment but each line had its own catchy phrase or word with it. So here goes my own little word for this wonderful write.......... ........EPIC

  • mywristshurt On Thursday, July 27, 2006, mywristshurt (411)By person wrote:

    it caught my breath as i was reading this.. i mean, i figured out when i was done, i wasn't breathing.. that's how good it was.. i mean, to think your love is dieing is one thing, but then to watch them die is a complete other.. and you made it specific i

  • mywristshurt On Thursday, July 27, 2006, mywristshurt (411)By person wrote:

    in this poem... i think thats why i liked it so much

  • BroKen-GlaSSHeArT On Thursday, July 27, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT (69)By person wrote:

    oh my god this is absolutely amazing, i could barely breathe.

  • waterchica999 On Wednesday, July 26, 2006, waterchica999 (30)By person wrote:

    it refers to those sweet moments you get rarely their so beautiful yet hurt so much when u know u can't ever have that one again...

  • A former member wrote: "They're" Evil When "They're" Gone?

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