Tension Breaking Beauty in My Face
By Fading_Smile
The futility of my hazel gaze
Find that incorruptible warmth elsewhere
Blanketing false hope over insecurity for days
Your smile bites my conscience bare
Sharp "friendly" words trickled from your lips
And your eyes read nothing but apocalypse
I tripped on guilt, to your satisfaction
Singed by the heat of goodbye
I sweated away pointless confliction
My heart turned to ashes and I'm alive
But I finally found shelter
In different chords,
You always were too sharp
At least,
Thats what I keep telling myself
I always was out of tune
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© 2006 Fading_Smile
Published on Sunday, July 30, 2006.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Tension Breaking Beauty in My Face"
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On Saturday, October 21, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
whoah whoah whoah i so was not ready for this. its crazy good, like pop tarts
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
(69) wrote:
gods alive your amazing kid, i wish i had your talent, i think ive always loved your writing but i never knew it was you till i saw your page and recognized a poem^^
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On Saturday, August 12, 2006, ColdScaredAlone
(77) wrote:
This was a nice read. I especially like the last line.
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On Tuesday, August 8, 2006, Tonights Decision
(132) wrote:
i feel this, very much so...
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A former member wrote:
"singed by the heat of goodbye"...excellent write. Left me reeling in the words and straining to hear the tune behind them. Exceptionally well done. ~*Beth*~
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On Sunday, July 30, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
damn... the way you write sometimes bring tears to my eyes.. and this was one of them.. you are able to put out everything on your mind.. and you also have a way of putting a variety of words into one piece.. like, i'll read it and i have to think about w
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On Sunday, July 30, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
what you are writing.. (i'm a blonde, please excuse me) but this was a very good write... very good write, indeed
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On Sunday, July 30, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Blake I tell you, you know how to bring the reader in and feel the emotion you put into your works. Fantastic job hun! Julia~
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On Sunday, July 30, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
That last line.... awesome!