Comments by Dei
- "i prefer the shorter version. I find it a bit more honest and personal. like you arent trying to hide what you really mean under pretty blankets. both ARE beautiful. But the first one won me. "
Posted by Dei on "Wishing for you" by BetaWolfinVA
- "I hear ya. Used to be a smoker. The line about loving the feel and hating the taste, absolutely. and makes for an effective metaphor as well. I wrote a poem glorifying smoke in a different way. titled Smoke Rings... or some nonsense like that. Anyways, well done. "
Posted by Dei on "Chainsmoke" by HeadpatSlut
- "this was a very structured poem for a very unstructured act. I have noticed a pattern to your poetry in that you always end with a gasp that causes me two read it twice. "
Posted by Dei on "Masochisms Bliss" by Ravenblade
- "very sweet. I like the Origin story. this was very different from mine and jack's Goodbye. I am glad we could inspire. "
Posted by Dei on "origin of 'Good Bye'" by BetaWolfinVA
- "I am sorry to hear that Natalie. I'm glad you found this poem but i hope it didn't make a hurtful situation more painful. Stay strong lady friend. "
Posted by Dei on "He spoke venom." by Dei
- "I wish we could all be so lucky. Nicely presented, tragic and romantic the way i like it. "
Posted by Dei on "fabricated." by eidos
- "guess you arent a fan of the ancient and widely respected poetic form of haiku then?
mr. All Alone person. "
Posted by Dei on "fabricated." by eidos
- "i completely agree. I was in the middle of astronomy class yesterday and as the professor stood lecturing me in the sciences of the universe i couldnt help but this how incredibly poetic it all was. "
Posted by Dei on "Poetry in Motion" by Alchemist
- "i submitted this for the Golden Ratio contest here on DP and won. It was very fun for me. This is on of my favorites. :)"
Posted by Dei on "Phi." by Dei
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