Cosmic Connection

By FearlessDragon

Whilst the stars consume our sight
The moon shall mourn its shine
For eyes trapped in the snow blind
Nothing remains divine

The depths are fathomless
Where languages do not exist
Mere fragments in the rift
Form every tale and twist

Across this crowded stream
We wade invisible ... unseen
We're but intertwining dreams
Sharing secrets ... cosmically

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Copyright 2013 FearlessDragon
Published on Monday, January 28, 2013.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I like this poem. It's well written and laidout. Keep writing!

  • A former member wrote: You are a great writer. I love the mystic and spirtual essence of your writing. I'm anxious to read more! What's your sign?

  • FearlessDragon On Saturday, July 27, 2013, FearlessDragon (138)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much... Aquarius is my sign.

  • A former member wrote: Distant love...may be far apart physically but mentally, always connected. A beautiful display of emotions one goes through when apart from their love.

  • Ortolan On Monday, February 11, 2013, Ortolan (214)By person wrote:

    Perfect rhythm, I enjoy the simplicity of this key piece.The message suggesting to open the mind to wisdom.Excellent.

  • A former member wrote: *sighs* this was simply beautiful.. love it. it would be a fave if I had the room for it :( 10/10 you're so damn talented!

  • Nehema On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, Nehema (962)By person wrote:

    ***sighs heavily... Beautiful - XXOO Scholar

  • PoetessDarkly On Thursday, January 31, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    Dear FD you always have me gasping til the end of your poetry. I feel privileged to read your work. It's poets like you that make the reading so enjoyable.

  • FearlessDragon On Friday, February 1, 2013, FearlessDragon (138)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much poetess! That means a lot.

  • Stephanie Sideways On Monday, January 28, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    This was great and I really think I totally understood it after the 4th time. Very internal cosmic AKA Internet. Love the last stanza especially. The first stanza is maybe saying that we look into that world so often nowadays ( I get told of my my 'moon' all the time) we can know anything we want really. But those near to us do miss out on our attention. Well that's what I got! ( I am a stickler for interpretation)

  • Dei On Monday, January 28, 2013, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    this was so lovely. thank you for sharing

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