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Chainsmoke
By HeadpatSlut
Chainsmoke
All these cheap cigars
are only good for an ignition-
Although I only smoke a small handfull
a day-
I love the feel, hate the taste, but in the ash exists a schism-
Chainsmoking in my dreams to chase the midnight screams away-
Everytime I light one up, I think about the Past-
It's poison like
the nicotine, exhaling smoke damnation-
Chasing demons out of my
mind, until I am the Last-
And as I chase the aftertaste, I breathe
in Daylight's revalation.
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Copyright 2013 DK6_Marius
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On Thursday, February 28, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
well written, interesting description - humm, never been a smoker, dad was until his heart attack, mom still is, sister, i think, smokes, wife smokes, and the first ex gf smoked until 7 years ago,,, so ive been second hand smoker all my life... whee... and when i found out this year that first ex gf stopped smoking is when i started to sneeze at it...
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...whatever it takes. maybe the 2nd hand smoke will wipe em out...
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2013, Dei
(665) wrote:
I hear ya. Used to be a smoker. The line about loving the feel and hating the taste, absolutely. and makes for an effective metaphor as well. I wrote a poem glorifying smoke in a different way. titled Smoke Rings... or some nonsense like that. Anyways, well done.
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Anything but Erik, almost killed a friend of mine (if even still sold). We all gotta have our vices - be thankful for the smokes, cool piece bro!
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Smoke those damn chains away, and the invisible ones are the most hardened. Cheers DK-6
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