Comments by Deviated09

"I love the brother in arms tense used.. Very intense write. I like it. Keep em coming!"
Posted by Deviated09 on "WARTORN" by WarTorn

"Alas, that exactly mirrors my thoughts many a night.. Great write, my friend. Keep them coming =]"
Posted by Deviated09 on "Putrid" by Doomy_One

"Rather interesting introspect into where we, as humans, are going. I just pray we never do have to see the day where we must beg for breathable air and potable water.."
Posted by Deviated09 on "Classic Alchemy" by lupus tenebrae

"I can definitely feel the emotion in this.."
Posted by Deviated09 on "I'm Done" by chococat_122

"All truth. All things I have lived through, toned down to be publicly acceptable. I just need people to realize the greatest monsters in this world are some of the people we look the highest upon.. Fathers, priests, police, medics, hospitals, churches.. These are the weights I bare in life, the curse of seeing so many of these bastardized monsters living in normal society, getting nothing but respect, while others suffer greatly from it and get cast aside when trying to bring the truth to the surface."
Posted by Deviated09 on "Untitled" by Deviated09

"Noted, and thank you for the input =] It's my joy to share some of my talent(how ever much practice I still need with it lol)"
Posted by Deviated09 on "The New Breed" by Deviated09

"I like the play back and forth between hope and feeling low. Good write =]"
Posted by Deviated09 on "apples and smiles" by Pureheartless

"Good write.. I like the strong inner desire for that last bit of surreal happiness. Time to re-read it =]"
Posted by Deviated09 on "+++++" by darkleprechaun

"Wow... Very deep.. As someone else said, Who will keep us safe, if not our protectors.. New fan here. Damned good, but depressing work."
Posted by Deviated09 on "Oh Daddy, How could you?" by Sticky Kitty

"This is a very much needed piece in the collection of writings. More people need to see what teens go through, especially now-a-days. I raised my little brother as a parent would, since it was just us and my mom growing up. He died at the age of three, and the neighbors covered everything up and got a corrupt lawyer and their church minister to blacklist us throughout the community. I was just barely in highschool going through that shit... I'll be the first to admit, the thought of taking a few shots at the pieces of shit in this word would do a lot to remove strees, but... idk.. This was a very great write. Thank you for putting this view into writing. I hope this helps people one day.. Very good work. - D"
Posted by Deviated09 on "A Message From A Tormented Teen" by Kittykat

"Yes, I have kids. It's what's left in my life that makes me fight day to day."
Posted by Deviated09 on "The Father's Lullaby" by Deviated09

"Very good write. I like the beauty in life it brings out."
Posted by Deviated09 on "Picture this" by Omalleyjr

"Indeed, a good read. I empathize with this writing very much."
Posted by Deviated09 on "Almost Past" by LoneWolf

"It's just an insight into the thoughts of someone pushed a bit too far. Thank ya for the criticism though =]"
Posted by Deviated09 on "The tears of time." by Deviated09

"This is a very truely good write. You are a gifted writer. I hope your talents have held strong for you over the years since this was written. Thank you for the great material."
Posted by Deviated09 on "Until We Meet Again" by cre

"This is very excellent."
Posted by Deviated09 on "I cannot be loved " by Corinthian

"Thank you =] Indeed, I've had my fair share of life's experiences and it tends to show more so in some of my works.. I appreciate the criticism/advice, btw :)"
Posted by Deviated09 on "My writing just is." by Deviated09

"I very much like this one. Very intense.. Great write, very great write"
Posted by Deviated09 on "A ticket, please..." by diavolessa

"You have my respect fully on this write. It's just untouchable.."
Posted by Deviated09 on "Ode to war...." by Winter Born

"As I get the time to write, I will gladly give more as long as there are people out there that can appreciate it. Thank you for the words of inspiration =] It's exactly what I need"
Posted by Deviated09 on "We are..." by Deviated09

"That was a very good write and a good read =] I love how it switched up a bit Keep up the great work!"
Posted by Deviated09 on "Love Birds" by Hands_Around_My_Throat

".. Wow.. Very intense.. I like it. Sadly, there is a relation in there, I can see it all so well. It was written too well, I think lol Keep up the great work ^_^"
Posted by Deviated09 on "black dimentia tides" by Deja vu

"Very good work =] I like how it was wrote so we can incorporate a part of us into it(those of us that bear these same weights and virtues)"
Posted by Deviated09 on "Anita Halfpenny" by Audrey_Star