black dimentia tides

By Deja vu

lost in a sea of black dimentia
no one can help me
while the tides overtake me
slowly my brain rots away
with a hint of scitziphrenia
and a dash of manic depression
very soon i'll be in a corner of a padded room
unable to move
my very humanity is being eaten
consumed by the black tides of my eternity
no one can save me
im being pulled slowly
until eventually i get washed away into this deep madness
inside my head
i plead for a shining light
i beg for mercy once again
i'll wake tomorrow and forgotten what i've already said
dont pretend to understand
dont have sympathy for what you can never comprehend
just pray with me that i will have mercy in the end
the swift current will not tease and taunt me
but may it be quick and take me all at once
may i breathe my last breath a sigh of relief
that it has come quickly
every moment im aware of my ultimate sacrifice
im only haunted by the blackness in which ive fallen
because i cant see and the dead calm quiet is so deafening
once and for all may i have peace

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Copyright 2003 Deja vu
Published on Tuesday, December 30, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Deviated09 On Saturday, February 11, 2012, Deviated09 (90)By person wrote:

    .. Wow.. Very intense.. I like it. Sadly, there is a relation in there, I can see it all so well. It was written too well, I think lol Keep up the great work ^_^

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