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apples and smiles
By Pureheartless
hello today, ready for another shameful day
sit with me, lets talk, what should we change
the cats are fighting again
i wouldnt seperate them
bring me back my flower
mabey i can be happy
please dont bring me weeds
i get no pleasure from the kids that creed
toda ive gone so far down
its a blessing that i havent drowned
open your arms again temptation
the reality of our complex situations so formal
this game, this game of chess we play
even though i sinned again ive lived another day
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© 2008 Pureheartless
Published on Tuesday, January 15, 2008.
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"Poetry"
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On Friday, March 16, 2012, Deviated09
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wrote:
I like the play back and forth between hope and feeling low. Good write =]
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On Tuesday, January 15, 2008, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
Apples, reminds me of sin ( thanks to genesis connotation, then again apple was never mentioned...anyway!) "the cats are fighting I wouldn't seperate them"- this is a crucial line to the poem, i love it. There are a few typos, but overall I love the title, the body and the ending. Lovely :)
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