Comments by dwells

  • "The name sounds familiar but phonetically "sin daily" is a close approximation. And I'm sure we all do too, cheers FB! Most Excellent."
    Posted by dwells on "Syndalee" by FadedBlues
  • "A wonderful biography with a modern spin to it Faded and I'm guessing I know this person, maybe...Anyway another tale spun with mastery, and may she find her voice again - cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Pictish girl" by FadedBlues
  • "Reading (and listening) are indeed becoming lost arts. No give and take going-on either, in the world of ME! Cheers, for this too will pass, silently and unlamented."
    Posted by dwells on "after sixx" by FadedBlues
  • "The hourly rate should be 1/2 the boffing bill, if you hurry before this offer expires (online coupon available). PS - no spurs are allowed!"
    Posted by dwells on "starlite motel" by FadedBlues
  • "Tremendous slice of life and the realism was totally captivating. Reminds me a bit of Johnny Cash's "Sunday Morning Coming Down", written by Kris Kristofferson as I recall, cheers guys!"
    Posted by dwells on "distant voices {w.blue angel}" by FadedBlues
  • "Much enjoyed FB - every time I'd write something like this my wife would tell me I'm channeling Hillary Clinton! Nevertheless like the old song"If you wanna be happy for the rest of your life, never make a pretty woman your wife..."Cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "plain girl" by FadedBlues
  • "Hayworth I'd guess, and red heads always have a thing for me for some reason? (not complaining). Masterful piece on the world's oldest profession, writ with a tinge of obsession, much enjoyed!"
    Posted by dwells on "fantasy merchant" by FadedBlues
  • "The robe is at the discretion of the sun's luminosity and the earth's shadow as you well know FB - marvelous simile on an often promoted but seldom derided subject, just superb in the loneliness beyond the pale, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Naked Moon" by FadedBlues
  • "Lots of poseurs out there nowadays, but then I've been outta the loop for a long time too. Anybody getting married anymore I wonder? A surrealistic slice of life, ; sounds expensive to me, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "pagan eyes!" by FadedBlues
  • "Sometimes just a feeling, and often times that is enough, well-said FB, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "Daedalean" by FadedBlues
  • "Tom Waits was great in the day - perhaps more poet that troubadour. The pretty faces deny him his due that we can only admire in absentia, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "livin' the blues" by FadedBlues
  • "Wishing this would just go on forever, as a warm blanket was pulled over me, for the long winter's night - cheers Faded!"
    Posted by dwells on "sacrament of dust" by FadedBlues
  • "A wistful and wonderful reverie and I too used to possess much of the same, but the wife has other priorities concerning keepsakes, so the garage sales and Goodwill reaped my treasures, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "the untidiness handbook" by FadedBlues
  • "Egos do tend to get in the way sometimes, especially when we are forced into snap judgments, unexpectedly, and the soap bubble we've been inhabiting pops. Stinging our eyes and speechless, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "rush away, angel" by FadedBlues
  • "An inter-species romance is usually not capable of creating viable offspring, but you never can tell with those Satyrs! Much enjoyed this narrative tale of a lusty tryst in the great outdoors, always a treat FB, thanks!"
    Posted by dwells on "Carnal Captive" by FadedBlues
  • "Pyrex is unbraekable with temperature extremes. But I think the breaking is part of the making process, as we become beings betond the animal instincts that clamor for control, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "glass heart" by FadedBlues
  • "Then there are those who hate poetry, but my experience has been that they also dislike reading too. So we live vicariously in a world of words that not everybody appreciates, but we are not alone - until they burn the books...cheers FB!"
    Posted by dwells on "orphans of poetry" by FadedBlues
  • "The battered child syndrome: must be something I did? I'll try harder next time. The insecure future syndrome: if he leaves me I'll have nothing, what will I feed the babies? And changes will be made for many, but not all, the walking wounded and the dearly departed. Striking piece (pun intended)"
    Posted by dwells on "too many women" by FadedBlues
  • "The awareness of the end of a relationship is more pronounced in the male psyche I do believe (rascals that we are), while the female, the home builder, the mother of all hopes against the hopeless. At least in my linited experience, cheers FB!"
    Posted by dwells on "blue ryder" by FadedBlues
  • "Jerry Lee Lewis was "the killer" for some reason, a contemporary of sorts. My wife tells me Elvis' twin was 6 months old when he died - so he probably has no recollection, unless spiritually. Wonderful paen to the guy that competes for my wife's affections, but I have a distinct advantage being alive. Cheers bro'"
    Posted by dwells on "Elvis & heartbreak" by FadedBlues
  • "I always eat the heels, and my wife can't stand it when I suggest putting a hot dog diagonally on a single slice of white bread! Gotta have those buns you know... We grow more progressively spoiled with each generation. Thanks for wrapping this up with a fond remembrance and heavy heart, dig it!"
    Posted by dwells on "the bread we wouldn't eat" by FadedBlues
  • "I always like the light on, but sometimes when the camersa are rolling it does get kind of hot and bright, so I just imagine that I'm falling into the sun! (HA) - cheers Faded!"
    Posted by dwells on "province of darkness" by FadedBlues
  • "Surely there are some redeeming qualities? Maybe she's hooked on your poetry, and they say madness is only a step way from genius, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "she calls me baby" by FadedBlues
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