gutter for my bed
By FadedBlues
sure, it was love like wine
from a cloudless vineyard where the earth is
pure, un-desecrated; a place you read about
in a Hemmingway novel, maybe, where you
don’t need a taxi to get around.
the bouquet was compelling, so I sipped it gently
like the sommeliers do, aware of the bitter trap it
kept secret. it didn’t put up a fight, not the slightest
resistance, but lured me as if I were in control.
the sweet taste of it overcame me. give it to me by
the litre, the magnum or several, hell, I could handle
it. I wanted endless dregs of it, wild & luxurious, rushing
down my throat. it was salacious & sinful & regret
swirled in the colors of it. I thought I could choke it
down…..but it strangled me.
drunk & passed out in the gutter, ragged lovaholic,
still reaching for the broken bottle…
somebody shut off the moon, I’m tryin to sleep.
Comments on "gutter for my bed"
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On Tuesday, October 15, 2013, M Morgan
(198) wrote:
oh! Buy two more of this wine!!!! I bet it was a red wine!!! Lovaholic in fight against a moonlight!
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On Saturday, October 5, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
It is amazing what alcohol can do for a heart seeking something. I haven't woke up in the gutter, yet. But I'm workin' on it. Cool as always FB. Later -
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On Thursday, October 3, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Friends, thanks. love is an unmerciful addiction...
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On Thursday, October 3, 2013, Rebel tiGer King
(239) wrote:
Te cinema in your words is poignant, very vivid and a great read. Thanks - RTK
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On Thursday, October 3, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
What a way to go! Although tomorrow might tell a different tale in the recollection, cheers FB!
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A former member wrote:
Nicely put when they're done with you they kick you to the curb and leave a nasty scar in your heart for you to remember them by.
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On Wednesday, October 2, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
aware of the bitter trap it kept secret. it didn’t put up a fight, not the slightest resistance, but lured me as if I were in control. .. fuck me.. i love you . shut off the moon i'm trying to sleep... fucking epic god i wish i could bookmark this,
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On Wednesday, October 2, 2013, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Your words flowed beautifully like a fine wine. I love your attention to detail so abstract. What a fine day to be a wino, while living a Hemmingway scene. Bows-
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On Wednesday, October 2, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Woe to the intoxication of that bittersweet emotion. How could it possibly effect a die hard controller of fate. Place your heart upon the refined palette of the tiger... she savors... Beauty in the highest form:)~ Exquisite, blues*
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On Wednesday, October 2, 2013, haunted
(837) wrote:
excellent poem mr. faded. I love how you struggled with alcohol in this. the dirty side of drinking no one wants to admit im thinking. but awesome poem! loved it.