Carnal Captive

By FadedBlues

Carnal Captive

{a response to ‘Carnal Moon’ ~ Lilith Rose}


from my vantage point behind a gnarled tree, I gazed
upon a gaggle of naiads bathing in the lake. my plan
was quite basic for a satyr such as I: I would attack &
rape one, perhaps two, if I were quick enough.

suddenly, a shadow fell across me. I turned, & beheld a
human female, clad only in the rays of the moon, shockingly
stunning, as voluptuous as Venus herself. she approached me
without fear, close enough to drag her nails down my chest,
sharp yet tender. then she slapped my face & laughed.

thus enraged, I grabbed her & threw her to the grass. my
mouth fell upon her pomegranate breasts, & I savagely
chewed her cerise nipples.as my cornucopian horn became
engorged, she spread her legs, & I stormed the gates of her
beckoning mystery with the fury of a minotaur.

the grip of her slick flesh carried me to an Olympus beyond
imagining. for minutes, I rammed her feverishly, & she responded
with the moans & agitation of a primitive, salacious creature. at
the proper moment, her hips rose & tightened against mine, as
wave after wave of my violent deluge invaded the interior of her
pagan sanctum.

a few moments later, she crawled away, & I watched as white fur
blossomed from her skin. her beautiful face became the visage of
a wolf, snarling, but no less beautiful. her yellow eyes memorized
my fright, & she appeared to smile, if a wolf is capable of smiling.

as she departed, vanishing into the veil of night,
I wondered: what would the cubs look like…

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Copyright 2013 FadedBlues
Published on Wednesday, May 22, 2013.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Nehema On Tuesday, May 28, 2013, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    I love the ending. This left me wanting more. A pleasure to read, the fun side of blues - XXOO Scholar

  • Stephanie Sideways On Saturday, May 25, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    She wolf . Grrrrr. I love how your poems make me feel ;-) x

  • FadedBlues On Friday, May 24, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    Dan, Nikki, Kendra, thanks. mythological fantasies are fun...

  • blue angel On Thursday, May 23, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Visually and physically stimulating indeed. In one word 'Sensualizing' ! Thank you for sharing with us your ingenious imagination.

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    Ohhh that is awesome Faded.... and to think it is a response to one of mine.... :)) Scholar

  • dwells On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    An inter-species romance is usually not capable of creating viable offspring, but you never can tell with those Satyrs! Much enjoyed this narrative tale of a lusty tryst in the great outdoors, always a treat FB, thanks!

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