livin' the blues

By FadedBlues

livin' the blues

 
 
the night passes slow, like it was stalled.
scared, maybe.
 
you doped away the nickel bag you stole
from an old woman, so you hit the bottle.
after a few shots, it hits back.
 
Cinderella was a one-night stand. the glass
slipper broke & left splinters in her foot.
shanghaied sailors whistle at her limp.
 
your last silver dollar leaked away
in an alley with your last blow job.
 
somewhere the sky holds a flush in diamonds,
the sea is calm & a lemon drop wind blows,
but you’re ridin’ the rails with the ‘bo’s –
it’s a round-trip run to hell & back
but you got a one-way ticket…
 
the pulsating neon that invades your 6th floor window
is a ‘last chance’ sign & your bed is a lonely island, the
tropical sheets dredge up lobotomized memories of a
ginger-haired girl but you can’t make love to a shadow.
 
you’re a dead man who ain’t got a grave to fall into
or a bullet to swallow & you’re livin’ the blues...





 

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Copyright 2013 FadedBlues
Published on Sunday, July 14, 2013.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"

Author's Note:

picture is the 'Heart of Saturday Night' album, Tom Waits.
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  • Devilish On Tuesday, July 16, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Damn! you're a dead man and ain't got a grave to fall into.. wow.. that gave me chills.. i love my fadedblues.. Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Monday, July 15, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    Friends, thanks. I've beeen watching Waits' 'Downtown Train' video...

  • A former member wrote: Deeply impressive, the last lines rawly reel in the grand finale in all its literary brilliance. Thanks for your comments

  • andhaka On Sunday, July 14, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    "Cinderella was a one-night stand. the glass slipper broke & left splinters in her foot."...wow. You sir are one helluva poet. Totally awesome.

  • dwells On Sunday, July 14, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Tom Waits was great in the day - perhaps more poet that troubadour. The pretty faces deny him his due that we can only admire in absentia, cheers!

  • PoetessDarkly On Sunday, July 14, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    awesome pen, blue. My favorite part is the blowjob part.

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