Comments by OLd SouL

"its the only thing I answer to and the only thing that can punish me to a profound extreme. love your depth. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "Kingdom of Conscience...." by urbanhumility

"you remind me of another poetess that use to roam DP, even though you two have 2 different styles, you invoke similar feelings when I read. There's a beautiful morbid thing happening. It hurts when I read but I can't seem to tear myself away from such cryptic hypnotic words that still come across in a pretty package though its all bound in barbed wire. Yea, my words are failing me, but I hope you understand my appreciation. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "blue salt ." by Corinthian

"that was crazy. kept me on the brink of confusion and wrapped me in at the end. very original "
Posted by OLd SouL on "pocketoblivion" by sIo

"Dev is right... that last line sets it all off. Nicely done Little one. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "Falling Down" by Little_Zombie

"heh.. 'scars are memories you can stare at' I was just pondering this on my route earlier this morning.. when I see comments or references about people's works are like knives slicing open flesh and it all pouring out.. I would have looked at my words as more like scars, constantly haunted by memories.. you like how I avoided commenting directly on the piece and just the author's note. i'm such an ass. Anyway, thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by OLd SouL on " No Such Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane

"awww, that was lovely. He must be mighty proud to be your rock. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "Outlaw" by DarkDruidess

"that sincerely warmed me.. liked the repeating verse very much. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "Yuletide Coffee Mug" by lupus tenebrae

"beautiful final lines from a kind heart :)"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Self Imposed Solitude" by Lylani

"I've found myself circling around this.. been here 3 times now. I'm afraid to touch it because I know this situation.. it was felt. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "three seconds of time" by ruthless48

"Man, my heart goes out to you for experiencing this. I've only known this kind of devastation on a smaller scale.. we've been pretty fortunate with the hurricanes... but every year we wait for our turn. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "Ambient noise in Joplin, the new normal." by Rachel

"so describes where i go when i draw or write intensely. you're becoming a favorite. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "My Sacred Sanctuary" by daiglepoems

"not many can pull off rhyming this well and get their point across.. and once again, your ending is spot on.. wraps it up perfectly.."
Posted by OLd SouL on "The Far Side of the Moon" by daiglepoems

"man.. story and rhymes like this are so damn tough, at least for me.. I thought it was a little shaky in the middle but the ending so outweighed that. That was badass to read. grats."
Posted by OLd SouL on "Down in Yucatan" by daiglepoems

"Oh, yea. So simple. I must be fucking up my query search royally.. damn, that 4 letter word. Glad to see this pop up on POTD, grats. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "A Simple Search Function" by steuss

"'we plucked stars out of the sky and fed them to one another' well now... that was might damn fine. I sunk into this one like quicksand."
Posted by OLd SouL on "Rhythms of the Sun" by Carmina Gitana

"I disagree with your note. Thought the ending was consuming.. drowning a bit myself."
Posted by OLd SouL on "fins aren't wings and won't help anyway" by NikesRain

"hoping its a done trying and just start doing. I often find myself saying trying when in fact I'm not really trying at all.. otherwise something would change or be done and it'd be noticed. 'scraping tally marks for the minutes'- like the particular section the most. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "tearing down the destructionist" by past tense

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