Falling Down
By Little_Zombie
Fallen below
The
Surface
Clawing my way back
U
P
Only to fall back
D
O
W
N
When I’m half way
Up
Wanting to see the starry sky
I never dreamed of walking on land
I never know what land was
For I live at the bottom of a well
I only dream of being in the sky
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Copyright 2012 Little_Zombie
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On Friday, January 30, 2015, Shikiryu
(68) wrote:
i love that last line
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On Wednesday, May 16, 2012, Dominic
(53) wrote:
I love how you take a poem then strap a nuke to its syntax and let it go off. Good one.
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On Wednesday, May 16, 2012, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
Dev is right... that last line sets it all off. Nicely done Little one.
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On Wednesday, May 16, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Awe.. the last line gave me chills.. how beautiful.. i love it.