Falling Down

By Little_Zombie

 Fallen below

 

 

                                  The

                                                                  Surface

Clawing my way back

 

 

 

 

U

       P

 

                Only to fall back

 

D

 

       O

                W

                             N

 

 

 

 

When I’m half way

Up

 

                          Wanting to see the starry sky

 

 

I never dreamed of walking on land

 

 

 

                              I never  know what land was

 

 

For I live at the bottom of a well

 

 

I only dream of being in the sky 

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Copyright 2012 Little_Zombie
Published on Wednesday, May 16, 2012.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Shikiryu On Friday, January 30, 2015, Shikiryu (68)By person wrote:

    i love that last line

  • Dominic On Wednesday, May 16, 2012, Dominic (53)By person wrote:

    I love how you take a poem then strap a nuke to its syntax and let it go off. Good one.

  • OLd SouL On Wednesday, May 16, 2012, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    Dev is right... that last line sets it all off. Nicely done Little one.

  • Devilish On Wednesday, May 16, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Awe.. the last line gave me chills.. how beautiful.. i love it. Scholar

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