Rhythms of the Sun

By Carmina Gitana

Last night, I dreamt
that I'd gone back
to where I'd come from,

Where the pulsing of the earth
was clear and strong beneath my feet,
and found its answer
in the pulsing of my blood,

Where life was motion, measured
in the beats of my heart
against the wind.

Last night, I dreamt
that you came back for me,
and that together,
we rode bareback on the evening,

and with arms grown long as the road,
we plucked stars out of the sky
and fed them to one another.

Last night, I danced
on a forgotten beach,
my body twisting like a tongue of fire in the dark,
until I found the rhythms of the sun
and fell across the broken strings of your guitar.

When I awoke, there was sand in my hair
and salt on my lips,
and my hands were reaching
for home.

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Copyright 2005 Carmina Gitana
Published on Friday, February 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • soul_versing On Wednesday, January 6, 2016, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    Beautiful hushed tone that reinforces a calm journey deep within the mind-scape. I fell in love with the idea of "Where the pulsing of the earth was clear and strong beneath my feet,..." exquisite detail you laid out here. .applauds. -Write on love Scholar

  • Stranger On Sunday, June 9, 2013, Stranger (264)By person wrote:

    "we plucked stars out of the sky and fed them to one another." -- One of my favorite lines from anything, anywhere, ever.

  • OLd SouL On Sunday, May 13, 2012, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    'we plucked stars out of the sky and fed them to one another' well now... that was might damn fine. I sunk into this one like quicksand.

  • A former member wrote: Unnervingly consistent, you are.

  • A former member wrote: I like this. "With arms grown long as the road" is my favorite part.

  • Mari On Sunday, December 3, 2006, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    well!you roped me in! lol

  • A former member wrote: Completely awestruck by the glorious sensuality exuded in your writing. So thankful that i was graced with this tonight.

  • sIo On Saturday, March 12, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    oh wow this was so gorgeous and intriguing yet at the end you cut the rope you'd woven for us to climb up. truly beautiful write. i can't get over the ending. it's superb.

  • A former member wrote: I find this peice to be very real to me as it brings me back to a time that I have since grown very fond of

  • Solace On Saturday, March 12, 2005, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Reminds me of a book I read, the wheel of time, the tuathanan or something like that are nomads searching for the song, yet they cannot find it...they are searching for home and yet they are home...as far as i interpret anyway

  • Solace On Saturday, March 12, 2005, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    this piece is a perfect prelude to the other half of it, and brings it in even more clarity, so much can be lost that you no longer know from where you had come and where home was...adrift and astray, dreaming for what is an evanescence...

  • A former member wrote: Lovely. This piece oozes with regretful longing.

  • Chimauron On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, Chimauron (87)By person wrote:

    I have no idea how to critigue such an outstanding work. Except to say, make more make more!!! You have made my favorites list with this one.

  • Gideon Lost On Saturday, February 19, 2005, Gideon Lost (138)By person wrote:

    Beautiful! I love your style. So vibrant and alive.

  • Anth On Friday, February 18, 2005, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    another truly stunning work, grabbed me at - Where life was motion, measured in the beats of my heart against the wind. and swept me away with and with arms grown long as the road, we plucked stars out of the sky and fed them to one another. - perfect

  • A former member wrote: gods, that was an amazing piece... jaw dropping, amazingly beautiful, wonderful, and so full of life and love...

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