Comments by lupus tenebrae

  • "I neglected to tell you after all this time, I finally got to see the movie at least a year ago. I'm not afraid to admit, it had me crumpled up on the couch, sobbing. It must have been just what the doctor ordered."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Hachi Waits" by Gray Vision
  • "It's this dedication, that's welcomed in the DP nation. That's the way, don't let writer's block have the last say or lack thereof, pierce it like a spotlight through the mist. Nice to see another post from you, it's been awhile eh?"
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Simplicity" by Gray Vision
  • "The rocky road is always the path less travelled, and the destination waiting at the end, like a chalice full of sweetest nectar. It's always rewarding to look back, and realize the growth of one's self. Good luck on your journey as well. Thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Rocky Road" by Gray Vision
  • "And a powerful oath it is, she must be truly special for such an airtight vow. Very intimate, and protective piece, write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
  • "Perhaps I've done too much, I hit my limit again lol. Well no rush, it'll be there for anyone to read I guess, and anytime."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Impervious" by Gray Vision
  • "Hmm, sounds like me. I spend too much time worrying about others instead of myself. When their lives are on track again, I realize that mine is still in shambles. I swam the deepest of oceans for my friends, only when they made it back to shore did I find that I had no ship of my own. Thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Don't Know Anymore" by Gray Vision
  • "Though time with my mother was short, there was just enough to feel that nurturing. Like the sweetest of dreams, then waking up before it even began. This gives me a mixture of feelings, write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "A Mother's Touch" by Gray Vision
  • "A rekindled spark, resurfacing friendships, new beginnings, sounds like a good night to me. It's nice to see that some friendships can be reborn nowadays, write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Making It Right" by Gray Vision
  • "No sight more refreshing than a clean slate, mistakes of the past are erased. A new horizon, a rebirth of self. Thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Starting Over" by Gray Vision
  • "No thank you man, your works are enjoyable to read, they are filled with such honest emotion which is art in its truest form, and for all those tumbleweed filled moments in the chatter lol, I also appreciate the support you and everyone else have given to my works, much respect."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Appreciate You All" by Gray Vision
  • "Awesome piece, there are many things that lead someone astray and into the clutches of death, through seemingly inescapable torment, depression, and addictions, it's a sad reality, and you depicted that well. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "A Soul Astray" by Gray Vision
  • "That made me choke up a little man, the loyalty the dog shown is what a true friendship must be like, to be there for them when they're close, and to wait for them when they're gone, the ending was especially heart wrenching, well done my friend."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Hachi Waits" by Gray Vision
  • "Very vivid write my friend, I could hear the rotating barrel as if it were right next to my head, and inspired by a lifetime movie even, well done indeed."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Once Upon a Story" by Gray Vision
  • "That was a nice write, it's true too people don't seem to notice that the people who cared all along were right in front of them, well done."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Transparency" by Gray Vision
  • "That was a great write, I used to get this kind of feeling a lot, and unfortunately I was right about it, well done, described that sense perfectly. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "When Death Knocks" by Gray Vision
  • "Very good write, it made me feel vulnerable, especially "You left me all alone, in this world of knives" I myself have been in this situation, that uncertainty cuts deeper than any dagger, well done."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Alone" by Gray Vision
  • "Very neat write, I just imagined this poor soul walking a lone stretch of road with his shattered armor, and it had a great message of following those that are doomed, well done, it turned out a lot better than mine did lol."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Armorless Knight" by Gray Vision
  • "However for the abuser, that pain they cause others is a deadly cycle. Eventually they themselves may find their own bodies reduced to bruises and scars, more than likely at the hands of their victims. A great write my friend, depicts abuse really well, thanks."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Abused" by Gray Vision
  • "That had to be one of my favorite haiku's. A complex image, and powerful emotion, conveyed through few words. Well done, thanks."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Silence" by Gray Vision
  • "Very vivid write my friend, this really exhibits the true power of fear. How it breaks down every mental safeguard, and opens the floodgates to a nightmare world you would've never known existed beforehand, well done."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Nightfalls" by Gray Vision
  • "That's the best thing about frustration, before too long it burns itself out, and that's what separates it from hatred. Well done my friend, thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Frustration" by Gray Vision
  • "I really liked the flow, and it's as if this write is mocking and begging for someone to try and hurt you. Knowing full well they can't, genius, thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Impervious" by Gray Vision
  • "I don't know how it would feel when you take the last breath, but you can always see how it makes others feel. That's what I say anyway, well done."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Finality" by Gray Vision
  • "Great write, no matter how insignificant the lie it's still a lie and will always evolve into bigger lies, it's deadly progression at its finest. Well done, thanks."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Spawn of Lies " by Gray Vision
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