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Silence
By Gray Vision
The beating sun, shines down on
An old lady, poetry
teacher,
Who's for the first time, quiet!
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Author's Note:
Feel free to comment, your oppinions is what makes these works worth while, tyvm and have a great day.Comments on "Silence"
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On Sunday, February 24, 2013, Star
(879)
wrote:
visuals are beautiful, when it comes to this tiny haiku... certainly in awe.. thanks (:
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A former member wrote:
Not usually a fan of haiku's but this was very good, thank you for this pen
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A former member wrote:
this makes poets around the site feel the pain of the poet described here...amazing write. hopefully none of us will reach that point of silence with age.
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On Saturday, January 29, 2011, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Ya I hope not, even so though when I decided to write this, it was to capture a moment. It was jsut the frist time that my teacher had been this quiet, I don't know if she was reflecting on something at the time, but she was just so quiet. Thank you for dropping by =)
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On Monday, May 10, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
That had to be one of my favorite haiku's. A complex image, and powerful emotion, conveyed through few words. Well done, thanks.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
It was the first haiku I ever wrote and still is to this day. Thank you very much =)
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A former member wrote:
In such short words, poetry can be so breath taking, You're making one point and one point only, and only few words can make it beautiful.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Thank you so much for the comment megann =)
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